User talk:Pundit02

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[edit] Nitsana Darshan-Leitner

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia! I noticed you have created this article, which looks quite solid and well-written. I am concerned though that some of the language used in it might possibly cause a violation of Wikipedia's neutral point of view, particularly the opening sentence "Since 1998, Nitsana Darshan-Leitner has been leading the struggle to fight the Palestinian and Islamic terrorist groups...". Wikipedia requires all articles to conform to the NPOV guidelines, which includes describing people in neutral terms and not in an overly positive or negative tone. Do you think you could possibly re-assess the article and remove some of the non-neutral language from it? If there is anything I can do to help you with this, please feel free to leave a message on my talk page.

Happy editing! Lankiveil ^{(speak to me)} 11:31, 3 April 2008 (UTC).