Talk:Prodea Systems
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[edit] Is Press Release Language Appropriate?
Creating a fully integrated, seamless home network Proving users with simple, intuitive experience Providing a solution that is cost-effective, reliable and secure. Under development since 2005, Prodea Systems was founded in 2006 by Anousheh Ansari, Hamid Ansari, and Amir Ansari, who have a rich history of vision, entrepreneurial spirit, and ultimate success.
This is not neutral language. Some of the verbiage (specifically the hagiography of the founders) is Control-Veed right from the company web site.
- I've rewritten it in "English". Since no hard details of the product have been announced this is just blah-blah PR. --Dhartung | Talk 19:44, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
I did not participate in the deletion discussion, though I would have weighed in with a "weak keep."
