Talk:Princess Elisabeth of Hesse and by Rhine

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[edit] House table

Is the 'house table' at the end of this article relevant to this girl? She is not included in it. In anyh case, the house table does not look right. How can a 'house' have a birth and death year. Hmains 19:12, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] GAC

  1. Well-written: Pass
  2. Factually accurate: Pass
  3. Broad: Pass
  4. Neutrally written: Pass
  5. Stable: Pass
  6. Well-referenced: Pass
  7. Images: Pass

Congratulations! I was going to comment on a few things I found annoying, such as the use of the nicknames of her parents constantly, rather than their real names (or even pronouns), but I decided just to change it myself. While this referencing style isn't very common on WP, it fits rather well here, and is an acceptable style in any case. As such a minor figure in history, I doubt that you could find any other sources on her, but it would be preferable if at least one more could be found. In any case, well done. --PresN 16:43, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA Sweeps

This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. There are however one problem with the article which should be addressed.

  • The lead is very short and should be extended to two paragraphs which give a clear picture of the princess and her life. At the moment the lead conspiculouly fails to provide an adequate introduction.

The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, --Jackyd101 (talk) 23:34, 2 March 2008 (UTC)