User talk:Pjiman1

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Happy editing, Evan Seeds (talk)(contrib.) 06:52, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Straight ally

Hi Pjiman1. Welcome to Wikipedia, thank you for your edits to the above article. It is with regret that I must inform you that I've reverted your addition. The content you added was not very well written; it's read like an essay. Please also note that the information must comply with Wikipedia:Neutral point of view policy, phrases like "Allies are invaluable assets in the struggle ...." do not (see also Wikipedia:Avoid peacock terms for a list of some words that should be avoided.) The paragraph beginning with "There are many ways to become an ally..." does not contain encyclopedic information, and read like an advertisement. I dearly hope you are not discouraged from editing, and I suggest you work on this article at one of your subpages, like User:Pjiman1/Sandbox, for example. Feel free to contact me if you need assistance; I do not have much expertise on the subject (disclaimer, that is), but if you can provide reputable sources for the material, I'll help you rewrite it to conform to Wikipedia policies. :) Best regards, - PeaceNT (talk) 13:49, 22 January 2008 (UTC)