Talk:Pinwright's Progress

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[edit] Extra info?

If you look on most sitcom articles, the producer is not named, the director is not either for that matter. I won't remove it now, but I really feel that it is surplus information and makes the opening paragraph very long-winded. --Berks105 16:58, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

Absence of information in some articles is no reason not to have it in others. I don't see how the main production personnel are any less notable than listing the entire cast. In any case, I have moved it to a separate "crew" section, so hopefully that satisfies your concerns about cluttering the lead. Angmering 17:10, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

My concerns about the lead were that it was all one paragraph; as I had split it into two paragraphs I had no further concerns. I think it looks better as two paragraphs than as another section ("Crew" as a title doesn't really work as I'm not sure the writer is a really a member of the crew"). --Berks105 17:18, 18 February 2007 (UTC)