Talk:Pikachu/to do

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  • "Pikachu is most famous for being the "face" of the Pokémon franchise, perhaps being the most widely recognised around the world. " - needs reference
  • does not have enough footnoting, and could use with a few more references.
  • needs to have its grammar and spelling checked and corrected.
  • The cultural impact is in stub form.
  • WP:LEAD is pretty poor
  • lots of Weasel words (eg "probably, the most popular") a fair dose of repeating itself,
  • some needless references to the editor's other favourite Nintendo games.
  • The cultural impact section is still a bulleted list.
  • The biology section is written from an in-universe perspective
  • The "in the anime" section is headed up with a decorative image (can we replace it with a screenshot of Pikachu and Ash?)
  • Game names aren't always in italics.
  • In the anime section, paragraphs often start off talking about one thing and end talking about another.
  • There could be better linking- like in Biology, various electrical concepts aren't linked like they could be.
  • Some of the wordings bother me: "Pikachu is the only Pokémon in Ash's huge party that has been with him in every series, although a Phanpy he rose from an egg joined him after he travelled around Hoenn."
  • "Many of the Pokémon animated shorts with all-Pokémon dialogue have featured Pikachu as the main character, often as the main voice of reason. "
  • some concepts are casually thrown in without explanation or linking (like a "Phanpy").
  • the order of the sections feel haphazard and mixed together. (Why is anime Pikachu's diet in that section? Why does a description of in-game pikachus separate the anime and manga sections? etc.)
All tasks completed —M inun (Spiderman) 15:26, 17 July 2006 (UTC)