Talk:Piccarda
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I am the author and I am confused as to why this article has been tagged for cleanup, since there was no explanation as to how it could be improved. I plan to remove the tag in a week unless someone tells me how it can be fixed. --Survivalism (talk) 02:48, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- You are quite right and I apologize for not offering a better explanation. And right now, I don't remember just what was my reasoning. It might have been just an initial reaction that it didn't look right - it didn't have a proper lead sentence, it had only one wikilink, and it didn't have any categories. Then I slightly edited the first sentence so that it is least looks proper, you've added a second link, and you've added categories. So those objections are mostly addressed.
- I think what it needs most is a lead sentence to establish context - she is a fictional character in Dante's classic Divine Comedy. It could also use more wikilinks.
- I went ahead and added a lead sentence, more links, and an ISBN number. I've removed the cleanup tag. Cheers. Sbowers3 (talk) 13:59, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- Hi there. I'm new to creating wikipedia articles and need all the help I can get. Thanks so much for the explanation and the help!--Survivalism (talk) 16:33, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
