Talk:Phillips Disaster

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[edit] images too large

i'd recommend replacing the images with 'thumbnails' - they overwhelm the article as is. perhaps if i get some time i'll give it a go. Anastrophe (talk) 17:51, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

Thanks very much for the feedback. You must be clairvoyant, because just this morning from another article I learned how to make thumbnails, and was planning to implement it here. Only then did I see your suggestion. I've made a first stab at it, but I'm not sure how to pretty up the formatting. Please make improvements if you have the time. Thanks again. Art Smart (talk) 18:11, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

you're welcome, and nicely done. my only other suggestion would be to move the thumbnails down into the sub-sections - generally the lede is text-only, with accompanying illustrations within the details later in the article. otherwise, it's a great improvement. Anastrophe (talk) 18:15, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

You are right. What I need to do is split up the lead section, and the put the first two images in the subsection that talks about the explosion. Will do later today. Thanks again. Art Smart (talk) 18:22, 24 December 2007 (UTC)