Talk:Philip K. Paulson
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[edit] NPOV
This entry is not written NPOV. I am going to attempt to rectify that (fullerton 03:42, 26 April 2007 (UTC))
Fullerton,
Thank you for your corrections.
I acknowledge that my original article was not dispassionate, and violated NPOV. However the one you submitted was too limited. It excludes the obituary from the Union Tribune which had been having a running battle for seventeen years with him, which is a part of his story.
I have incorporated some of your style. And I hope my current revision is closer to a fair objective, but more full description that is appropriate for this encyclopedia. I have left the reference to the complete descriptions of the court case to be found in Mount Soledad, since that is the major public part of his life, and the readers should know where to access it.Arodb 16:37, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
It seems to me, as just a casual user, that this article still introduces too much bias, particularly in the description of the Union-Trib as a lead "detractor" and the far-too-emotional verbiage surrounding the description of Mr. Paulson. 70.181.143.195 06:48, 4 June 2007 (UTC)NKK
