Talk:Pharaoh's daughter (wife of Solomon)/Comments

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Congratulations on a great article and amazing job (and in only two days!). I am rating this B class and was tempted to say A class. Nominating the article for Did you know... on the Wikipedia Main Page and the steps for at least a B class biography may be helpful. A few of the lengthy quotations may stop a reader from following the narrative. Is it possible to cut some of the longer quotes in favor of your own words? Also are there any Web sites that could be in an External links section? A gallery or a library or some other resource might bring the story into the present day. Minor points, what about moving the Note for Jewish Publication Society to a Reference section by itself? Also I don't know the rules for punctuation inside quotes, but as there were examples of both I chose inside. Apologies in advance if there is a Wikipedia rule to the contrary. The story and illustrations, the divisions into sections, and the citations are really well done. Best wishes. -Susanlesch 19:03, 20 January 2007 (UTC)