Talk:Peter Tinley

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[edit] Labor Party

The article states "Federal Opposition Leader, Kim Beazley, approached Tinley to represent the Federal Division of Stirling for the Australian Labor Party in the next Federal election[2]." Kim beazley is no longer the labour party leader having been replaced by Kevin Rudd. I changed the sentence to "Ex Federal Opposition Leader, Kim Beazley, approached Tinley in 2006 to represent the Federal Division of Stirling for the Australian Labor Party in the upcoming Federal election[2], 2007." Not the best sentence in the world but its more accurate. Feel free to modify --Spuzzdawg 02:46, 15 June 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Rank?

Usual to give the rank at retirement of military personel. Anyone know his?--Mongreilf (talk) 20:55, 23 November 2007 (UTC)