Talk:Peter Bynoe

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Peter Bynoe was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. Reviewed version: January 24, 2008

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A fact from Peter Bynoe appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 5 November 2007.

Contents 1 Structure 2 Same person? 3 Auto Peer Review 4 GA Failed

[edit] Structure

Now that I read that he supervised the building of the New Cosminsky Park, I think that that info should be in the lead. Some of the details of his dealings with the Nuggets should be moved out of the lead. I just threw that text together yesterday to expand the article a bit, and am not wedded to any of my edits. I cannot figure out the intricacies of these business deals, and am not sure what is really true, so I am going to abstain from further substantive edits to this article. Speciate 21:38, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

I will take this into account. Can you get me the sources you used for the fact tags though?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 22:33, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

It was on various places on answers.com, which is supposed to be a bad source as it is also a wiki, even a wikipedia mirror sometimes. Speciate 22:45, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Same person?

Is this by the article subject?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 22:33, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

Unlikely, seems that Bynoe is a common name in Barbados. Speciate 22:42, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Auto Peer Review

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• The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.^[?]
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• This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.^[?]
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.^[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 20:13, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA Failed

the article is not upto the mark. lead needs to be expanded as per WP:LEAD. honors section needs to be clubbed. infobox is incomplete. there are no images. i think first the article should meet the basic requirements. thanks, Sushant gupta (talk) 08:37, 24 January 2008 (UTC)