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Hello, Peregrinebee! Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. You may benefit from following some of the links below, which will help you get the most out of Wikipedia. If you have any questions you can ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking Image:Wikisigbutton.png or by typing four tildes "~~~~"; this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you are already loving Wikipedia you might want to consider being "adopted" by a more experienced editor or joining a WikiProject to collaborate with others in creating and improving articles of your interest. Click here for a directory of all the WikiProjects. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field. Happy editing! LittleOldMe 14:34, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] Lamprologus multifasciatus

You're welcome, I hope the information proves useful.

It is a good start to an article. The more you do the better you get. Well done so far.

Some tips on your article:

  1. Spelling - Spelling is relatively easy to check by copying and pasting into Microsoft Word, or some other program with inbuilt spell checking.
  2. Grammar - grammar is more difficult to master, but Word helps you here too. Watch out for mixing your singular and plural (using it and them/they in the same paragraph when referring to the same object).
  3. Add Wikilinks where appropriate.
  4. Make the opening paragraqph as descriptive as possible. Assume that the reader has little or no knowledge of the subject. You never mentioned the word fish once in the opening paragraph, yet this would immediately assist the casual reader to identify what the article is about. The way it was, it seemed to be about a mollusc.

You identified some other ways to improve the article yourself, so I'll not repeat them. Regards LittleOldMe 15:16, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Adoption

Hey,

if you want to be adopted, drop a note on my talk page.

Have a nice day,

The Rhymesmith 10:16, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] WikiProject Aquarium Fishes August 2007 Newsletter


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