Talk:Pemmasani Nayaks

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[edit] Problems

Aside from the grammar, style, and tone (all of which need work) and the wikification (unwikified lead, etc.), the article is couched in very one-sided language; it makes very dogmatic statements about events with no sign that there might be alternative interpretations and views. --Mel Etitis (Talk) 22:19, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Editing

The editing process is on. Improvements are being carried out.Kumarrao 18:39, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

Please give sources for new material, otherwise your work might be reverted. --Mel Etitis (Talk) 09:22, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Editing

Dear Etitis, I addded new references. I shall Wikify the article soon and correct style, grammar etc.,Kumarrao 18:02, 30 May 2007 (UTC)