Talk:Pekiti Tirsia Kali

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[edit] Sources

Just concerned about the sources of some of the information - could some of it be cited, possibly? Such as Kali being taught to those military units, etc. Otherwise the wording should possibly be changed to indicate possible instruction, if it can't be evidenced.

[edit] Clean Up

I placed the cleanup tag since though the article does appear to have some good content, it needs to have a much better direction. Try stating what it is in the first sentence. Could also use some formatting work. Fallsend 16:44, 9 November 2005 (UTC)

hey whose to say a page has bad content. everybody knows that its possible to edit anytime. stop tagging my articles for clean up. how would you feel if others did? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Wikipedian c (talk • contribs) 17:15, 9 November 2005 (UTC)

Wikipedia articles don't belong to anybody. --Tony SidawayTalk 12:27, 14 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Hybrid style

I've adopted a hybrid style here, using User:ExtremeUnction's paragraphing, more or less, with User:61.69.139.204's paragraph spacing. I hope I haven't removed any information in doing so. --Tony SidawayTalk 12:25, 14 November 2005 (UTC)

It really doesn't look that good (no offense to Tony!). I've removed the extra spaces. - Ta bu shi da yu 12:26, 14 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Attention anonymous user in the 61.69.* IP block

I've already introduced the term in wiktionary.

Please stop introducing extra spaces in the article and reverting edits. Having two spaces between every line is contrary to the Manual of Style. Also, the Grand Tuhon information by itself is not worthy of its own article, unless you can expand upon a simple definition of "Supreme Grand Master" (see Talk:Grand Tuhon). If you disagree, please hold the discussion here instead of simply introducing the changes. Thank you. --howcheng [ t • c • w • e ] 19:53, 16 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] merge from Pekiti Tirsia

I dumped and tried to roughly integrate the contents of Pekiti Tirsia. It now redirects here. Sorry about the mess. --Janto 14:31, 27 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] missing citations

It would be nice, if someone could add these to the article, since they seem to miss (the articles are all from www.pekiti-tirsia.net) and I'm not able to. Pekiti-Tirsia as training-system of the Recon Marines: http://www.pekiti-tirsia.net/military.php?lang=en&soundsParam=on&file=military and in addition, a training course for bavarian Police Tactics Trainers: http://www.pekiti-tirsia.net/pag_bericht_200105_GrandTuhonPDBA.php?lang=en&soundsParam=on&file=pag_bericht_200105_GrandTuhonPDBA The Battle of Grandmasters: http://www.pekiti-tirsia.net/pag_bericht_98nov.php?lang=en&soundsParam=on&file=pag_bericht_98nov —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.212.201.2 (talk) 09:27, 7 September 2007 (UTC)