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[edit] Youngstown Ohio Works

I actually haven't had a hand in writing this article, except for a few minor prose tweaks. I found it while assessing baseball articles, and I believe it's near Good Article standards. A couple specific questions I have are whether the article is too quote heavy, and whether any parts of the "Dissolution" section read like original research. Comments on these questions and any others would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.--Djrobgordon 04:37, 5 March 2007 (UTC)

It looks in reasonable shape as far as I can see. It is perhaps a bit quote heavy in the "Formation and league championship" section, but I think the rest are ok. The "Dissolution" section seems pretty well referenced, provided the refs do support what is said then it doesn't look too OR to me. Eve 13:26, 30 March 2007 (UTC)