Wikipedia:Peer review/The Who/archive1
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[edit] The Who
The Whole thing to be reviewed if possible, please list the strengths and weaknesses, thanks. Dennis Kussinich 08 00:12, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
- I didn't read the article, so there's maybe problems with the prose, but I found some things to fix:
- Fix the subsections, make an "history" section and add the first five sections there.
- In the discography section, remove the covers of the albums and make a simple list or maybe a table, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style (lists of works).
- All the quotes in the "quotes" sections needs a reference.
- Use the Template:cite web instead of those links.
- If a date doesn't include month and day, don't link anything, for example: "...Live at Leeds album, on which, recently, the entire 1970 concert is now..." 1970 shouldn't be linked.
- Remove the see also section, incorporate the link in the body of the article.
- Remove most of the external links. See Wikipedia:External links.
- The article is way too long (62 kb), you need to move the "performance" and "in the studio" sections to new articles.
- Ok, that's it. If something is not clear, ask on my talk page or here, someone will answer. Cheers. No-Bullet (Talk • Contribs) 02:36, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
- Comment Needs more inline citations, and the "Quotes" subsection under "Influence" needs prosifying. LuciferMorgan 19:52, 13 January 2007 (UTC)
