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[edit] Sumatra (chicken)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am doing this for an English project. Please review the editing and anything else you think may need changing.


Thanks, Poultrygirl (talk) 04:29, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

SGGH

I suggest:

  • Overall, it needs more information all round. As per WP:LEAD the main points of this information can be summarized in the opening paragraphs, and then the rest goes in each section.
  • Characteristics section contains physical attributes, but can also contain roosting habits, mating rituals etc. (even if they are generic chicken ones)
  • You could have a section on use of this species by humans, if there is anything
  • you need inline citations (using the<ref></ref> templates and a reflist section at the end, see WP:REF for help with this.
  • your image captions should contain more information than just a brief description, to enhance the usefulness of the caption

All in all, it just needs more information really, hope that helps! SGGH speak! 10:50, 21 April 2008 (UTC)