Wikipedia:Peer review/Star Tours/archive1

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[edit] Star Tours

Just want you guys to do the works. It's my first try at writing a Wikipedia article myself and I do believe I covered every aspect of it quite well. It's not an enormous article, but it's enough to give the reader a well informed feeling upon reading it, and maybe it will even encourage others to add to the compendium of Disneyland attractions.Indigoblu 21:19 , Oct. 7, 2004 (UTC)

• You could make the picture a bit smaller and break up the large paragraphs under the last two headings to make it easier on the eyes. Other than that, I've got no idea. I'm not familiar with the ride. [[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm|^(talk)]] 14:45, Oct 9, 2004 (UTC)