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[edit] Motor Life Boat

An instrumental tool in the coast guard's fleet, the motor life boat is an often overlooked but greatly appreciated sight when in need.

I have great respect for the mlb and the sailors who drive them and felt that it was time that they were featured in wikipedia.

what do you guys think? -Seasee 03:53, 3 September 2005 (UTC)

• It looks pretty good to me. The prose is a little colorful in places for an encyclopedic article: "unfortunate souls", "scurrying for high ground", "serving the Coast Guard ... faithfully" &c. If you're going to take it through for FA, they'll probably want reference tags. Have any of these boats ever been lost at sea? — RJH 20:29, 5 September 2005 (UTC)