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[edit] Lord of the Nutcracker Men

It's been expanded a lot since it was created, but there isn't as much to add, because it doesn't have the notoriety of modern books like The Giver, Lord of the Flies, and Harry Potter. Toothpaste 02:41, 10 July 2005 (UTC)

Overall it looks good. However the sentence that reads, "A main theme of the book is the pointlessness and irrationality of war," doesn't connect with the remainder of the same paragraph. It might, for example, be more appropriate at the start of the following paragraph concerning the father. Also do you have any additional information concerning the fact that this book has become required reading in American High Schools? For example, when was this decided and by whom? Thanks. — RJH 14:56, 18 July 2005 (UTC)