Wikipedia:Peer review/I Am the Walrus/archive1

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[edit] I Am the Walrus

  • This is a strong article. However, it does not seem perfect yet. Please review and leave suggestions. TheImpossibleMan 13:03, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
  • The lead is way too long- please see WP:LEAD. Consider moving the bulk of the lead into a section like "Overview" or "History". Thanks, AndyZ t 00:14, 28 March 2006 (UTC)