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[edit] Hurricane Gloria

Another very complete tropical cyclone article by WikiProject Tropical cyclones, which has been previously assessed and is expected to be a Featured article candidate soon. Titoxd^{(?!? - help us)} 23:14, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

I like it. Things that are needed are a longer intro and possibly more structure to aftermath. Hurricanehink 23:54, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

The lead, per WP:LEAD, should be expanded to a minimum of two paragraphs. AndyZ 01:03, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

I've expanded it now. Titoxd^{(?!? - help us)} 00:53, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

This is a very good article, but there are two one issues I need to bring up. First, I'm not sure that the paragraphs about Hurricane Bob are necessary. Second, although Image:H52 hurricane gloria 1985.jpg is from the Wikimedia Commons, it has no source so I may have to nominate it for deletion there. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 18:39, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

Never mind the second point. I just checked at the Commons, and it is a coast guard photo, although I don't know why I can't see that from here. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 18:47, 21 March 2006 (UTC)

OK, I'll remove the Bob information. The only reason why I put it in was due to the complacency left behind by Gloria, but I guess that's irrevelent. Hurricanehink 19:54, 21 March 2006 (UTC)