Wikipedia:Peer review/Brandon Routh/archive1

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[edit] Brandon Routh

Basically as complete as can be at this point in his career. Seems like it could pass GA. Would like to know on how to improve further. I suppose the intro could be expanded, though there isn't much to summarize beyond a point. Mad Jack 07:27, 25 June 2006 (UTC)

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  • Thanks, Andy t 15:15, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
  • As this is a biographical article, I suggest adding {{persondata}}. Also, instead of using {{Infobox Biography}}, use {{Infobox actor movie}}; it applies more to him and contains more relevant information. --NMajdan•talk 14:53, 26 June 2006 (UTC)