Talk:Paul von Mauser

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[edit] This article needs a re-write

I looked through this article, and it barely qualifies as a wiki page. Things like this especially: "Many versions of this design also were licensed to other countries, which also used to build their own versions of the G98. Most famous of those "foreign Mausers" are Persian Mausers, Turkish Mausers, Czech VZ-24 Mausers, Yugoslavian Mausers and some others. The list of the vast variety of the Mauser-type versions could easily cover a number of pages, but, for the sake of compactness, I will describe only the basic, German model."

Make me think it's either a very poorly written original wiki article, or it was copied from a firearms magazine. I think the latter, since it reads like something you'd see in a gun rag.

If it's from a magazine, it needs to be taken down immediately. Either way, a re-write is going to be necesssary. 64.150.152.159 (talk) 17:31, 5 June 2008 (UTC)