Talk:Paul Torrisi

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[edit] Biography assessment rating comment

The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Jreferee 16:02, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

I think most of the references in this article are nothing more than self-promotion rather than being actual content of interest and use. I would suggest this is reduced and would wlecome views. 09 April 2007 User:Zaf159

• Assuming that all the facts are true I think much of this falls just about on the right side of the line. I don't like phrases like "a fan-favourite" though. This sounds like chatter from a fansite or gossip column, not an objective encycopedia. Some of the content of the main text could be relegated to "trivia". I know that some people have a general problem with "trivia" sections but, within reason, I don't, provided it's written objectively. Anyway, that's my two cents FWIW. Matt 14:01, 9 April 2007 (UTC).

[edit] Does this make sense?

From the article:

"Though ultimately fired, Sir Alan Sugar did offer Torrisi a job — working with his son Daniel for his private jet company Amsair. Torrsi turned down the job on Sugar's advice..."

So Alan Sugar made a job offer and advised him to turn it down? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 81.152.168.24 (talk) 13:54, 9 April 2007 (UTC).

[edit] Paul Torrisi

I'm guessing that a certain Mr Torrisi had a lot to do with the construction of this page... 137.44.1.200 17:02, 21 April 2007 (UTC)