Talk:Paul Levinson

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Suggestion: could someone add Categories at the bottom of this article? Off the top of my head: Living Persons (at least, as of now...-), Americans, New Yorkers, authors, educators, media commentators, etc... Whatever you think appropriate. Many thanks. PaulLev 16:30, 16 September 2006 (UTC)

Also - suggestion for very minor change - should say Isaac Asimov's Foundation trilogy - rather than the current phrasing, which is a little confusing (and we don't need "famous"). Thanks again. PaulLev 16:35, 16 September 2006 (UTC)

Done. --ZimZalaBim (talk) 00:42, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Review comments

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Infobox fields need populating
  • Article needs reorganising with material from lead moving to main body of article, and lead itself pruning to no more than 3-4 paragraphs
  • Some basic biographical material missing, eg date and place of birth
  • Information on works should be expanded, and references are required
  • Section 'Media commentator' should be substantially shortened; there's no need to list all appearances
  • Section 'Songwriter, recording artist, and record producer' should be rewritten without bullet points
  • References should be added, preferably in the inline format
  • External links list could do with pruning

Espresso Addict 18:19, 15 July 2007 (UTC)