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[edit] New Approach
There are two goals here, the first and foremost is to build a good NPOV article, the second is to get all parties to work together towards the first goal. You both have good points, and you both have different perspectives. You also both have a good grasp of the subject.
Each of you tell me the one section header that you feel is most important in this article, you don't need to explain it just name it. Jeepday (talk) 04:29, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- Frjohnwhiteford - As the article currently stands "Criticism", but if you are asking where to start, I would suggest we start with the most blatant WP:BLP violation still in the article, which is in the "Personal Life" section, and is the bit about the nuns, and the violation of the canons. This is clearly original research, irrelevant, and an attempt to imply a scandal that is not otherwise documented. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 04:44, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- Biophys - "Relations between Orthodox Church and Russian State under Alexii II" Biophys (talk) 04:51, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
I hear what you are saying Frjohnwhiteford, one step at a time. I would ask each of you to write one section, Frjohnwhiteford write "Criticism"; Biophys write "Relations between Orthodox Church and Russian State under Alexii II", keep it about 500 words or less. use good references, and don't worry about the what the other is doing. Take a couple days, do it well and when it's ready leave me a note and I will come look. Like we said before the section should only contain topics related to the section header. If you start feeling frustrated read Wikipedia:The Most Important Thing Possible or Wikipedia:There is no deadline. I believe you are both working in good faith to do what you think is best, you are both trying to work towards the same goal you just have different visions of the goal. If you finish your section before the other, just wait until you are both done before starting something new. Will this work to start? Jeepday (talk) 05:10, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- That works for me, although 500 words may be insufficient. Of course, other users might appear during next few days, and they are very welcome to edit this article...Biophys (talk) 06:20, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
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- Edit by adding or clarify not removing, leave all references in place as appropriate. Do not remove references or referenced material unless you added it. When everyone gets done adding we can look at removing content as needed. If you feel that specific contend is untrue, or not supported by references and you beleive that other editors may not agree with your assessment. Bring it to my attention and I will offer a neutral perspective. Will that work? Jeepday (talk) 16:05, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
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- Actually, if you look above, you will see that I am the only who was formally agreed to approach suggested. I have every intention of working with the resolution process, and I will remind you that it is you who began editing and reorganizing this article immediately, and without asking for imput. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 18:10, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
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- I am waiting for some clarification on what it is that we are supposed to be doing. I am not clear on whether we are editing the article, or preparing drafts to be presented on the talk page. Also, so long as we are in the mode of not removing redundant content, it would be difficult for me to edit the section I had in mind. I could produce some additional content in Patriarch Alexei's defense, but that will increase the size of that section, rather than reduce it. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 20:31, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
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Sounds like you are both content to work on drafts, that is probably the best approach. If you don't know how to make a sub page let me know, unless you would prefer to work on your user page or off line. Jeepday (talk) 22:35, 26 January 2008 (UTC) Jeepday asked me whether or not I supported his approach. I certainly do. DGG (talk) 18:41, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Removing Content
A big part of the argument here is editors removing other editors work. I am seeing what looks like reliably sourced material being removed. While we are striving for balance, please let the contributing editors shorten their own work. If you feel strongly that a single reference is not sufficient for some content then it is appropriate per WP:BLP to remove it from the main article. But when doing so please bring it to the talk page (with the references supplied) indicate your specific concerns and give the contributing editors a chance to supply additional references or adjust the text as needed. Thanks :) Jeepday (talk) 16:18, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- Since content in defense of Patriarch Alexei has in fact been removed, how or when will it be put back, since it was removed contrary to your instructions above? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:34, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Nuns Removed by Jeepday (talk) 16:48, 26 January 2008 (UTC) per comments below
It has been suggested that the content on nuns below represents WP:OR, it does not appear that there is previously published reference supporting the claim that there are nuns working in the household in violation of the canon. Please provide references supporting the assertion of wrongness, and seek approval for reliability of the sources here before reposting. Thanks Jeepday (talk) 16:48, 26 January 2008 (UTC) the nuns are in charge of all the household chores and duties. The presence of unrelated women in an Orthodox bishop's house is canonically forbidden by the First Ecumenical Council (Canon 3[1]) and Sixth Ecumenical Council (Canon 5[2]).
- Alexius himself said that nuns are working in his house - a reliable source provides and interview with Alesius where he said just that. That is a Russian language source. Since you and Frjohnwhiteford do not know Russian (if I understand correctly), please avoid unilateral deletion of statements supported by reliable Russian sources without consulting with at least two users who know Russian.Biophys (talk) 18:12, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
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- He did not say that they lived there, and he certainly did not suggest this was a violation of the Ecumenical Canons. There is a difference between having women living in the same area, who come to clean the house, and having women share a residence. I do not speak Russian fluently, however, I read it well enough to know that you are engaging in original research here that is not substantiated by the source.Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 18:40, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- The remaining statement "On the residence compound there is a de-facto rotating women's monastery, according to the Patriarch's interview" is also original research, because the interview says nothing about a defacto rotating convent. This is an extrapolation by the person who inserted this irrelevant material. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 17:04, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
There is also nothing in the sources to warrant the inclusion of the commentary "originally it was meant as Patriarch Alexius I's dacha". Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 17:41, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- Biophys the general assessment made by Frjohnwhiteford is correct, if the reference does not say there is a violation of Ecumenical Canons, then per WP:BLP you can't say it in the article. Because of the nature of the content, you would probably need to find at least 2 published reliable sources that support wrong doing. If you have questions I am more then happy to answer them. Jeepday (talk) 19:52, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
- The article as it stands does not assert any wrongdoing: it says "the nuns are in charge of all the household chores and duties. The presence of unrelated women in an Orthodox bishop's house is canonically forbidden by the First Ecumenical Council (Canon 3[1]) and Sixth Ecumenical Council (Canon 5[2])." Just read the words, not your own assumptions.Muscovite99 (talk) 19:04, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- Right. There are two supporting links/sources here which tell about First Ecumenical Council (Canon 3[1]) and Sixth Ecumenical Council (Canon 5[2]). Unfortunately, those are Russian sources, so DGG can not read them. May be a partial translation is needed?Biophys (talk) 20:43, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
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- "does not assert any wrongdoing" Either it is intended means just that, or it is irrelevant. DGG (talk) 23:34, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- I agree. But the statement is completely sourced. First of two sources tells, for example (this is old but fully understandable Russian language): "Великий Собор без изъятия положил, чтобы ни епископу, ни пресвитеру, ни диакону, и вообще никому из находящихся в клире, не было позволено иметь сожительствующую в доме женщину, разве матерь, или сестру, или тетку или те только лица, которые чужды всякаго подозрения." It says that any Orthodox priest is strictly forbidden to have any women living in his house except his own women relatives (no matter what they are doing and who they are). Alexius has such women living in his residency according to his own interview (another reliable source). So, I do not see any problems here. Frjohnwhiteford raised the question if the "residency" qualifies as a "house". But Alexius said himself in the interview something like "my residence is my home". I personally prefer not to include such things in BLPs, but this is a legitimate edit by Muscovite99 Biophys (talk) 04:09, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
- "does not assert any wrongdoing" Either it is intended means just that, or it is irrelevant. DGG (talk) 23:34, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
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- When you take source #1 which asserts fact "A" (that in the Patriarch has nuns who live in the compound in which his home is, and source #2 which asserts fact "B" (that the canons forbid women living in the home of a bishop), and connect the two to make the conclusion that A+B=C (Patriarch Alexei is violating the canons), that is original research. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 05:17, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
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- What I am seeing here is that there appears to be two facts here that are referecened, They way they are placed does imply an accusation of wrongness that has not been shown to be documented outside of Wikipedia. Material can often be put together in a way that constitutes original research even if its individual elements have been published by reliable sources.
- 1. On the residence compound there is a de-facto rotating women's monastery, according to the Patriarch's interview;[1] the nuns are in charge of all the household chores and duties.
- 2. The presence of unrelated women in an Orthodox bishop's house is canonically forbidden by the First Ecumenical Council (Canon 3[3]) and Sixth Ecumenical Council (Canon 5[4])
- Both statements have been repeatedly removed from the article and repeatedly been reverted, This by definition is Edit warring Edit warring occurs when individual editors or groups of editors repeatedly revert content edits to a page or subject area.. There are only two ways to prevent an edit war, cooperation or enforcement. I have suggested both, neither has been embraced by the editors of this article. I am here because editors chose to request assistance with the disagreement. I am not going to participate in, take sides in, or try to manage an edit war. Jeepday (talk) 14:22, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- I removed sentence two above, again this morning per WP:BLP and WP:SYN. If an editor has questions, notices any other BLP concerns or requires a dispute resolution please leave a note at my talk page. Jeepday (talk) 12:17, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Three Choices
There are three choices for my participation in this article, which would the editors of this article prefer? Jeepday (talk) 14:22, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- 1. I don't participate at all
- 2. I facilitate the dispute resolution with the agreement of the majority of the editors here
- Agree.Biophys (talk) 18:38, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- Agree. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:45, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
- 3. I enforce Wikipidia policy
- I agree with this too... which is crucial. We obviously need an arbiter who ensure that a reasonable process is observed in getting this article into compliance with WP:BLP, which it currently is not. Experience has shown that the editors are not going to come to a consensus that will be both in accordance with Wikipedia Policy, and respected by all the participants, and so we definitely need your help. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:45, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
- I am available for dispute resolution. It is not my intent to be a primary editor of this article or monitor activities here to any great degree. I will keep this on my watch list and assume that editors will work in good faith to resolve amongst themselves most disputes. Jeepday (talk) 12:29, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Please stop removing the NPOV Tag
There certainly remains a dispute about the neutrality of this article. There is no justification for removing it until the dispute is resolved. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 15:03, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Work for KGB claim and loyalty to the Soviet State
While I do not comment on Patriarch's alleged work for KGB -- I want to make a point that Sergian loyalty to the Soviet state which was oficially discussed by the Patriarch does not equal to the alleged KGB work.
Indeed, that's true that Patriarch Alexius acknowledged that compromises were made with the Soviet government by bishops of the Moscow Patriarchate, himself included, and publicly repented of these compromises:
- "Defending one thing, it was necessary to give somewhere else. Were there any other organizations, or any other people among those who had to carry responsibility not only for themselves but for thousands of other fates, who in those years in the Soviet Union were not compelled to act likewise? Before those people, however, to whom the compromises, silence, forced passivity or expressions of loyalty permitted by the leaders of the church in those years caused pain, before these people, and not only before God, I ask forgiveness, understanding and prayers."
But it's important to note it wasn't Patriarch's reply on his alleged KGB work, but rather than that, justification on his own loyalty to the state and Sergian principles in Soviet time. Suggesting that it concerned KGB work is original research. ellol (talk) 01:29, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- I never said it was a response to his "KGB work", it is a response to the whole question of his collaboration with the Soviets. See my comments below. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 05:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
It's not original research when you state the proper context of a quote, and then quote it, and that quote is from a reliable source. It is only original research when you try to string several facts together from various sources, to reach a conclusion that is not found in either. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:00, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
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- By common sense that it refers to the accusations does seem to be the implication. But in the absence of direct evidence some qualification in the wording is needed. DGG (talk) 18:45, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- I must agree with ellol here. Simply serving Soviet authorities and being a KGB agent (not a KGB officer but an agent; some Russian Orthodox priests are KGB officers with a military rank, visit SVR headquarters in Yasenevo, etc.) are two different things. All sources (ten or more) claim that he was a KGB agent. Like ellol, I am not aware of any public statements by Alexius where he denies (or publicly admits) of being a KGB agent during Soviet times.Biophys (talk) 04:29, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
- By common sense that it refers to the accusations does seem to be the implication. But in the absence of direct evidence some qualification in the wording is needed. DGG (talk) 18:45, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
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- As has already been pointed out to you, the Moscow Patriarchate certainly has denied it:
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- "The Moscow Patriarchate has denied a The Times of London report alleging that the current head of the Russian Orthodox Church collaborated with KGB in the Soviet era.
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- Official spokesman for the Moscow Patriarchy Father Vsevolod Chaplin labeled such reports as "absolutely unsubstantiated" in a Wednesday interview with Interfax. "There is no data indicating that Patriarch Alexy II was an associate of the special services, and no classified documents bear his signature," he said.
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- "I do not think that direct dialogue between the current patriarch and KGB took place," Father Vsevolod continued. However, "all bishops communicated with representatives of the council for religious matters in the Soviet government, which was inevitable, since any issue, even the most insignificant one, had to be resolved through this body. It is quite another matter that the council forwarded all its materials to the KGB," he said." MOSCOW PATRIARCHATE REJECTS TIMES REPORT OF ALEXY II'S COLLABORATION WITH KGB, Sept 20 (Interfax)
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- "Chaplin, the church spokesman, said in March, "Nobody has ever seen a single real document that would confirm the patriarch used his contacts with Soviet authorities to make harm to the church or to any people in the church." RUSSIA'S WELL-CONNECTED PATRIARCH, Washington Post Foreign Service , 23 May 2002 Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:35, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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- The question is to what extent did the Patriarch collaborate with the Soviet government. He is accused of going so far as to be a KGB agent. He denies this (contrary to Biophys' assertion), but acknowledges that he did collaborate on some level. The citation does not constitute original research, nor is the quote taken out of context, but is entirely appropriate. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 05:19, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Propose Protecting this Article
My apologies for being off line while discussion here continued. In this edit Diff I asked for a second opinion and DGG has looked in. I believe that at the very least User:Biophys and User:Frjohnwhiteford are both interested in building towards a workable solution, and I suspect that WP:AGF can be applied to all the editors here. Because there are number of potential editors to this article I would like to suggest the following -
- The page be protected from editing by anyone accept an admin.
- The goal is to create the most accurate article possible with available references
- For any section that has content that is disputed by anyone the whole section will be removed from the article and moved to the talk page for review.
- You continue to work amongst yourselves on the talk page on the disputed content, ask Jeepday if you need a opinion or decision.
- Before asking Jeepday for an opinion all parties who are involved in the dispute give a short explanation of why their position is correct and provide policy (with links) to support their position.
- Everyone involved agrees to accept Jeepday's opinion as definitive, If two editors agree that Jeepday's opinion is not realistic We will ask User:DGG for a final decision.
- Agree to accept User:Biophys as an expert in the Russian language and User:Frjohnwhiteford as an expert on the church
- Everyone agrees to try not to take this personal, there is a history here, feelings are strong, and some viewpoints are harshly opposed. There is no question that in this process you will feel upset at each other and probably at me as well. You will think twice before accusing anyone of bad faith, and if you accidentally do respond poorly you will apologizes. If offered an apology you will accept it and continue to move towards the goal.
- When you have reached agreement on a section or paragraph of text, ask me or if I am off line for more the 48 hours use {{editprotect}} to add the content. Remember there is no hurry.
- If you support this proposal please sign below, and say you agree with the proposal
- If you don't agree please provide an alternative suggestion.
- We can modify or add rules as needed when a majority of those agreeing to this proposal agree to the new rule.
Proposed by Jeepday (talk) 04:05, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Agree
[edit] Tentative agreement with a minor change suggested
I would agree, with the caveat that Biophys is not the only expert in Russian who has been participating in this discussion. I would also ask that as a starting point, the article be rolled back to the last edit by Jeepday. A good bit of content has been removed that should not have been, and a good bit added back or inserted that should not have been. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:06, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Agree
--Miyokan (talk) 03:20, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Tentative agreement with a minor change suggested
I have been asked for input so he I am. I would also agree, but I must say that Frjohnwhiteford may not be the best person to rely on solely for the church view. While I don't want to engage in personal attacks, I must say that having seen his edits on four separate articles, I have yet to see an NPOV approach taken, and adherence to the spirit of Wikipedia is commonly absent. For instance: regarding an unreliable ref (that included factually incorrect material) in Russian Orthodox Church Outside Russia, he consistently avoided finding compromises, preferring to revert edits that were sensible. Another instance of his standards: when I pointed out massive copyvio in Jonah of Manchuria which he wrote, he responded by removing a little of it and putting quotation marks round the rest, claiming it was fair use (after having also claimed that the writer of it had no claim to copyright at all).
Hence, I have reservations. More input on the side of the church is required I feel. Malick78 (talk) 14:09, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- I never said that translator had no copyright to her translation, I said the original article (written in Russian, in China, in the 1920's, was public domain. That, and the other issues you raise are beside the point, and I would simply say that you are misrepresenting what occurred on these pages, and invite anyone who wishes to investigate it the issues, to go read the talk pages on the articles in question. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:42, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- I am agreeable to another recognized expert in the Russian language being part of the team, if a majority agree that there is another Russian language expert, item 12 address this. I am not agreeable to leaving any content in the article that is part of a disputed section. The last edit I made does not imply that that version is any better then any other version see M:The Wrong Version. I would protect the page in what ever version is present at the time, and remove any section where anyone questions any part of that section. It will not be replaced until there is consensus that the version being offered meets policy expectations. Consensus does not mean everyone agrees. Jeepday (talk) 13:56, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- I am agreeable to another recognized expert for the church being part of the team, if a majority agree that there is another church expert, item 12 address this. Jeepday (talk) 14:14, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
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- Other than this designation being honorary, what function will it actually have? I assume that it will not stop editors from disagreeing with me, if they have some basis, nor will anyone be prevented from challenging a translation from a Russian "expert"... so what is it exactly that is being proposed? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:01, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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Agree if points 1 and 3 excluded (see my alternative version below).Biophys (talk) 21:43, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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- Why would you think an intervention that did not include page protection would go any better than the first time Jeepday tried it, was ignored by several editors? Also, why, if you intend to work with this process, and comply with Wikipedia Policy, would you fear having this article page protected, and only edited by Jeepday as we worked through the issues as a group? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:38, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
- Points 1 and 3 are inconsistent with WP standard rules and practices.Biophys (talk) 05:34, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
- Wikipedia:EW#Enforcement and whether negative, positive, or just questionable — about living persons should be removed immediately and without discussion.Jeepday (talk) 15:14, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Why did you hide first few words? It tells: "Unsourced or poorly sourced contentious material — whether negative, positive, or just questionable — about living persons should be removed immediately and without discussion." Of course I agree with that! If a reference does not satisfy WP:Source, text should be removed. I am talking only about texts supported by reliable sources. If everyone agrees that that such sourced and relevant text can not be removed - I am with you.Biophys (talk) 14:38, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
- I think we are probably pretty close to the same place here, but there is no policy that says there is any text that can't be removed. I do not have a goal to remove or include any specific text, but I can't promise you that any specific text that has a reference will never be removed Example. The goal of any article is to be the best it can be, occasionally that may require removing referenced text. Wikipedia is a work of many hands and minds, occasionally the consensus flows to less content then one person might prefer. Additionally Wikipedia:BLP#Sources is a little more stringent then some other verifiability policies in Wikipedia, so even content that has one good source may be subject to removal. It gets even harder if you have conflicting reliable references. Lets just take it as it comes and look to written policy to solve any questions that come up. Like I said in item 5 of #Propose Protecting this Article when two (or more) editors can not agree, they present their sides with supporting policy, I will research, and give you a solution. Obviously not everyone is going to be happy every time. Anyone who has looked through my edit history can see I don't have a side in this article, let's just assume good faith on everyone's part and move forward. Ok? Jeepday (talk) 03:39, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Yes, we can move forward if this article is not protected and we all follow WP policies. This article is no different from others. If serious edit warring takes place, it can be protected by an uninvolved administrator according to existing WP policies. Personally, I am not enthusiastic about this article after such discussion.Biophys (talk) 04:25, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
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- I think we are probably pretty close to the same place here, but there is no policy that says there is any text that can't be removed. I do not have a goal to remove or include any specific text, but I can't promise you that any specific text that has a reference will never be removed Example. The goal of any article is to be the best it can be, occasionally that may require removing referenced text. Wikipedia is a work of many hands and minds, occasionally the consensus flows to less content then one person might prefer. Additionally Wikipedia:BLP#Sources is a little more stringent then some other verifiability policies in Wikipedia, so even content that has one good source may be subject to removal. It gets even harder if you have conflicting reliable references. Lets just take it as it comes and look to written policy to solve any questions that come up. Like I said in item 5 of #Propose Protecting this Article when two (or more) editors can not agree, they present their sides with supporting policy, I will research, and give you a solution. Obviously not everyone is going to be happy every time. Anyone who has looked through my edit history can see I don't have a side in this article, let's just assume good faith on everyone's part and move forward. Ok? Jeepday (talk) 03:39, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
- Why did you hide first few words? It tells: "Unsourced or poorly sourced contentious material — whether negative, positive, or just questionable — about living persons should be removed immediately and without discussion." Of course I agree with that! If a reference does not satisfy WP:Source, text should be removed. I am talking only about texts supported by reliable sources. If everyone agrees that that such sourced and relevant text can not be removed - I am with you.Biophys (talk) 14:38, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Wikipedia:EW#Enforcement and whether negative, positive, or just questionable — about living persons should be removed immediately and without discussion.Jeepday (talk) 15:14, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
- Points 1 and 3 are inconsistent with WP standard rules and practices.Biophys (talk) 05:34, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
- Why would you think an intervention that did not include page protection would go any better than the first time Jeepday tried it, was ignored by several editors? Also, why, if you intend to work with this process, and comply with Wikipedia Policy, would you fear having this article page protected, and only edited by Jeepday as we worked through the issues as a group? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:38, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Serious edit warring has taken place in this article. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:09, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
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(unindent} The edit wars are in the past, we are looking forward to a bright future of consensus building. Jeepday (talk) 14:45, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Don't agree
- Alternative suggestion.
1. The article is not protected. 2. Any sourced and relevant content can not be removed from the present or future versions of this article, unless there is a general consensus to remove (although it can be edited to be more consistent with sources; reduced in size, NPOVed, etc.). 3. If any disagreement is not resolved, we ask opinion of Jeepday with explanation (as he suggested). 4. Jeepday authority is accepted. 5. If two or more people disagree with Jeepday, they can ask DGG.Biophys (talk) 18:37, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
I do not agree with point 1 (protection). During last few weeks we had many edits of this article by users with different political views and perspectives, including Muscovite99, Malick, Martintg, ellol, and me. All these users had no problems negotiating the text. The dispute exists between Frjohnwhiteford and all others. Frjohnwhiteford considers Alexius to be his personal "spiritual leader", which potentially leads to a conflict of interest. By protecting this page, we remove it from a wider WP community, which is hardly warranted at this moment. Saying that, I would be glad to help with translations of Russian texts or go along with any consensus decisions.Biophys (talk) 18:59, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- As you will recall, the COI charge has been tried, and fallen flat in the eyes of uninvolved editors. Continuing to raise this issue is contrary to WP:NPA. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:39, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
I don't think page protection is warranted at this stage, as it doesn't appear to be a case of one group of editors conflicting with another group. Martintg (talk) 00:37, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- Only because at least one group has been trying to avoid an edit war here by getting some outside intervention. When a more moderate form was attempted, the other side simply disregarded it. They have also removed a good bit of content, without any discussion, contrary to what had been asked by Jeepday.Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:39, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- Apart from yourself, who are the other members of this group you are siding with? 202.12.233.23 (talk) 02:07, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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- There are a number of editors who have been trying to strike a balance here, and I will let them speak for themselves, but I am not the only one who has reverted some of the attempts to insert violations of the WP:BLP policy into this article, as can be seen from the edit history. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:27, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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- Sorry, I was wrong here. You are right. There is probably a user who supports you, although he made only one edit here (a revert of me) so far. That is User:Miyokan who had this "KGB troll" userbox invented by banned User:Vlad fedorov. I think that was simply a bad joke, because the KGB still only exists in Belarus, being replaced by two successor (FSB and SVR) agencies in Russia. Still, you are right.Biophys (talk) 17:58, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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- That was a low attempt to try to smear my reputation, that is obviously a tongue-in-cheek userbox. I agree with Frjohnwhiteford on this - why would you think an intervention that did not include page protection would go any better than the first time Jeepday tried it, was ignored by several editors? Also, why, if you intend to work with this process, and comply with Wikipedia Policy, would you fear having this article page protected, and only edited by Jeepday as we worked through the issues as a group?--Miyokan (talk) 06:35, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
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- You said: "That was a low attempt to try to smear my reputation". What are you talking about? I did not criticize you at all. To the contrary, it is great when users make disclaimers on their pages or announce their political views. I have seen userboxes of people who support Palestinian resistance or who "refute Stalinist propaganda". All of that is fine. You included a userbox saying that "you are a paid member of KGB Internet brigades". That is fine too. You simply stated your political position and views, and I respect that. I only said the userbox was probably a "bad joke" because I think you actually do not work there. If I am wrong, I am ready to apologize.Biophys (talk) 18:05, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Comments
Frankly speaking, I do not see an editorial conflict here, which would be serious enough to adopt such measures. At least not yet. There are many articles in WP that are subject of much stronger disputes. I suggest to wait a little and see how it goes. If it goes bad, then this suggestion is great and worth a serious consideration. "Bad" means "sterile" RR warring, when the article is not improving over the time. However if article improves as a result of competitive editing, then everything is fine from WP perspective. Biophys (talk) 04:33, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- The only reason we are not having a revert war right now is because we have Admin intervention. There certainly is a serious editorial conflict which necessitates some intervention... particularly when the less rigorous approach Jeepday had been taking was simply being reverted by contentious editors, who simply refused to abide by any of his decisions. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:03, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Church and State Section
There are a number of problems with this section as it stands:
1. It contains a very bad translation of Metropolitan Sergius' declaration. This is a very famous quote, which has often been translated, but never translated such as it is here:
"We wish to be Christian Orthodox and in the same time to consider Soviet Union our civilian homeland, whose joys and successes are our joys and successes, and whose failures are our failures. We consider every strike aimed at the Union, be it a war, boycott, any societal calamity or just a murder from behind... as the strike aimed at us."
2. Aside from the poor English usage reflected here, there are substantive inaccuracies.
Just to cite one example of more common way it has been translated:
"we want to be Orthodox and we want to realize the Soviet Union as our motherland, whose joys are our joys and whose sorrows are our sorrows." (from PDS Russia Religion News)
There are a couple of significant differences here. It is joys and sorrows, not joys and successes. Secondly, the word "Motherland" is very significant, and is not at all done justice by "civilian homeland".
3. The block quote from Patriarch Alexei's interview is also a poor translation, and furthermore is too long for this article.
4. Also, if we are to give a full treatment of this subject, there should be a good bit of discussion about the Social Concept Document, which was approved by the ROC in 2000, and deals extensively with this issue (who can see the most important excerpts from that document at the bottom of this page).
It would be better to put such material into a section of the article on the Russian Orthodox Church, or in a separate article all together, that was referenced in this article. As it is, this is a huge bunny trail, that only relates to Patriarch Alexei tangentially. It would be best to cut it down to a paragraph, and tie it into the discussion about collaboration with the Soviet government. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:23, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
- Since no one has responded to the above, I recommend that this section be eliminated. And that the relevant material be merged back into the controversies section, as presented on this page Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:31, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Marriage
There is no reason why the first sentence needs to distinguish between civil and ecclesiatical wedlock.
I would suggest that it simply read:
"He married Vera Alekseesva, the daughter of a priest from Tallinn Georgi Alekseev, on April 11, 1950."[2].
What follows is typical of the tabloid journalism found in Moscow News:
"...on Tuesday of the Bright Week when the mystery of matrimony is canonically forbidden. Moskovskie Novosti has alleged that according to an official report written by a priest-inspector Pariysky to the Leningrad Department for the Affairs of the ROC, the marriage had been unlawfully expedited in order for Ridiger to become a deacon and avoid military service (marriage is impossible after ordination in Orthodoxy).[2]"
I have already commented on the problems here. I don't believe it is correct to say that there is a canon that forbids marriage during bright week (though there is one that forbids it during lent). However, for reasons of economia, marriages are often permitted at times when the typikon would say they should not be performed. Certainly, it is contrary to normal practice to perform a marriage during bright week, but weddings are sometimes performed during lent or any other time, if there is a need that is deemed sufficient by the bishop. This material is irrelevant, and implies things that are not proven by the known facts. If it was left in the article, a discussion of economia would be necessary... which is a long bunny trial that is not warranted.
I would leave only the final statement:
"They divorced less than a year later."
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- As for the ban on matrimony during the Bright Week, it is directly forbidden by Chapter 50 of Nomocanon -- a valid source of Church Law. Hence all this fuss in Russia about "Красная горка" (Second Sunday after Easter) - the fist day after many weeks when wedding is possible in church.Muscovite99 (talk) 18:00, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
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- First, there is no need to say anything other than that they were married. One would assume it was a legal marriage, and that it also was a church marriage. Secondly, you are wrong about the Orthodox view of marriage. The Orthodox Church does believe in divorce, and certainly does not believe that marriage is eternal... one need read only the patristic commentary on Christ's response to the Sadducees on that subject. Thirdly, if you are familiar with Orthodoxy, you will know that Economia is often allowed when it comes to the question of when a marriage may take place, if there are grounds deemed sufficient by the bishop. As for the canons, there are no Ecumenical canons which address this issue that I am aware of, but it is certainly true that it is contrary to the tradition of the Church to perform a wedding during bright week... it is also contrary to the Church tradition to perform a memorial service on a Sunday... but this also is often allowed due to economia. Economia may be applied when the action is not inherently evil (and marriage is not evil), but when it is a question of the appropriate occassion or circumstance. You have the norm, but then you have exceptions to the norm that are allowed by the bishops discretion. All of this is completely irrelevant, and you have only a tabloid as a source. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 00:42, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
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- As it is, you have a tabloid article that implies a number of things that are not necessary conclusions from the empirical facts. Furthermore, as has been previously pointed out to you, if you are making a controversial point, more than one reliable source is necessary... and I would dispute whether you have even one at this point. It is also largely irrelevant, and if it remains in the text we will have to include an excursus on how the principle of Economia functions in the life of the Orthodox Church.... which is a bunny trial that distracts from the purpose of the article. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 04:16, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
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- The marriage and divorce are certainly notable enough to warrant mention. The commentary about whether or not it was uncanonical, and what was the motivation behind it, is the problem. These get into disputable, unprovable, and to some extent unknowable issues. And at present we have only one tabloid source... and the source is a tabloid. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:00, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
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More applicable Policy here, from WP:BLP:
"Wikipedia articles should respect the basic human dignity of their subjects. Wikipedia aims to be a reputable encyclopedia, not a tabloid. Our articles must not serve primarily to mock or disparage their subjects, whether directly or indirectly."
"In the case of significant public figures, there will be a multitude of reliable, third-party published sources to take material from, and Wikipedia biographies should simply document what these sources say. If an allegation or incident is notable, relevant, and well-documented by reliable published sources, it belongs in the article — even if it's negative and the subject dislikes all mention of it. If it is not documented by reliable third-party sources, leave it out."
We do not have well documented reliable sources here. We have one tabloid, repeating gossip, and making unprovable assertions. According to Jeepday's instructions, when a contentious assertion is made, at least two reliable sources are necessary. I would argue that we do not even have one here... but we certainly do not have two. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 13:20, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
Can we get a ruling here from Jeepday and DGG? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 13:22, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
- Ruling - I was slightly confused that the reference link is in Russian but the reference is named as Moscow News which is the English version of Moskovskiye Novosti so it may be more appropriate to name the reference with the Russian as the article does not appear to be available on the English site. I could find no indication that Moskovskiye Novosti or Moscow News was a tabloid, User:Frjohnwhiteford has argued that the source valid for reporting the marriage,Diff User:Biophys has suggested that an alternate reference be provided to support that the marriage occurred when the it was not canonically forbidden.Diff The rule is without bias all significant views (that have been published by reliable sources). There is a published reliable sourced with one view, it has been established that the marriage is significant, it would be biased to report incompletely. WP:BLP Does not require criticism to not be published but it does say The views of critics should be represented if they are relevant to the subject's notability and can be sourced to reliable secondary sources, and so long as the material is written in a manner that does not overwhelm the article or appear to side with the critics. Summary based on the evidence provided the content should stay in the article, it could stand to be reworded a bit "mystery" probably needs to go, but I leave the rewording to you all. If other sources are found that can be incorporated to improve the marriage section they should be. Jeepday (talk) 14:23, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
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- If you read what I actually wrote, I never argued that Moscow News was a reliable source, only that the fact that the Patriarch was married and divorced was noteworthy enough to merit mention. I can provide you with numerous sources that describe Moscow News as a tabloid, but here are two: This one, and this one, entitled Moscow News and Irresponsible Journalism. You ask for a source that states that the wedding did not occur during a period prohibited by the canons. So far, no one has cited an actual canon that prohibits weddings during the period in question. However, I have agreed that the wedding occurred during a period in which a wedding is normally prohibited, but the problem here is that neither you, nor Biophys, nor evidently the author of the article in question understand that when Economia is applied, there is no violation of the canons... there is a pastoral application of the canons... see the Wiki article on Economia, for starters, then you might read this article, or any of a number of theological works that deal with the concept. In the Orthodox Church, a laymen does not get to decide that he will be married during a period in which weddings are not normally allowed... and in fact the article in question states that the Bishop of Talinn allowed it... it does not mention the principle of economia, but that is simply due to the ignorance of the author. Economia is applied regularly, when there is seen a sufficient need to do so. There is the norm, but there are generally allowable exceptions, when the question involves things that are not inherently evil, but matters of discipline. There is only one source that I have been able to find in English or Russian which makes the assertions Sidorenko makes in this article... and that is Sidorenko. Is he a canon law expert? No. Is he a theologian? No. Has he ever attended a Sunday School class... probably not. How can this one source be considered a reliable and notable source, when making commentary about the application of the canons of the Orthodox Church? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:29, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- The source is Moskovskiye Novosti not Moscow News, additionally a quick look at http://www.thesun.co.uk/sol/homepage/ which is by definition a tabloid then looking at http://mnweekly.ru/ compared to http://www.nytimes.com/ shows the Moscow News has more in common with The New York Times then it does with the The Sun. The first reference you provided says this about the newspaper you are calling a tabloid; "today's restructured newspaper stands at the vanguard of newly independent periodicals" This one. Frjohnwhiteford you asked for my ruling you got it, had I agreed with your position, your history shows you would have accepted and supported that, now when I don't agree with your position you don't accept it. Your arguments are not sound in rebuttal and you are not providing any reference to support the article content as you beleive it should be. If you asked for my ruling because you thought I would agree with your personal view then you acted in bad faith and should read Wikipedia:Policy shopping, if you asked for my ruling because you expected everyone to respect and abide by it then, please do as you would expect others to do. Jeepday (talk) 14:06, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- If you read what I actually wrote, I never argued that Moscow News was a reliable source, only that the fact that the Patriarch was married and divorced was noteworthy enough to merit mention. I can provide you with numerous sources that describe Moscow News as a tabloid, but here are two: This one, and this one, entitled Moscow News and Irresponsible Journalism. You ask for a source that states that the wedding did not occur during a period prohibited by the canons. So far, no one has cited an actual canon that prohibits weddings during the period in question. However, I have agreed that the wedding occurred during a period in which a wedding is normally prohibited, but the problem here is that neither you, nor Biophys, nor evidently the author of the article in question understand that when Economia is applied, there is no violation of the canons... there is a pastoral application of the canons... see the Wiki article on Economia, for starters, then you might read this article, or any of a number of theological works that deal with the concept. In the Orthodox Church, a laymen does not get to decide that he will be married during a period in which weddings are not normally allowed... and in fact the article in question states that the Bishop of Talinn allowed it... it does not mention the principle of economia, but that is simply due to the ignorance of the author. Economia is applied regularly, when there is seen a sufficient need to do so. There is the norm, but there are generally allowable exceptions, when the question involves things that are not inherently evil, but matters of discipline. There is only one source that I have been able to find in English or Russian which makes the assertions Sidorenko makes in this article... and that is Sidorenko. Is he a canon law expert? No. Is he a theologian? No. Has he ever attended a Sunday School class... probably not. How can this one source be considered a reliable and notable source, when making commentary about the application of the canons of the Orthodox Church? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:29, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- You are talking theology and canons again (i am ready to accept what you have said here, but it is beside the point for reasons i have laid out above). The text of the second reference contains actually 2 texts (the one as was published in MN and below - the version prior to being edited by MN editors - there's no substantive difference) accompanied by Evgeniy Komarov comment which clearly says that he is the actual author of the piece and also that some other contributors had been involved, including 2 "museum officers" who did the archive job and provided the photos. He says that Myannik on seeing those was amazed as she had not expected them to be in any one else's possession (i suspect this particular bit may be meant just to absolve her of the responsibility for actually having provided those). I did not say anything "about this having been a sham marriage". All i said that there was (and is) a criminal code article called "fictious marriage" (in Russian) which interprets as such any wedlock that does not involve actual cohabitation (similar crimes exist in pretty much all countries). It is not frequently used for actual prosecution, which is usually an indication that is one of those used by certain agencies to browbeat a person into "cooperation" (the favourite article for such purposes in the USSR was male homosexuality (#121 prim), also never actually enforced but widely used). I think the whole point is simply not worth the hours we have already spent debating it, mostly recycling the same arguments. My feeling is that you tend to overreact, viewing any mention of the facts disagreeable with you as almost a personal attack. Believe me, PA himself (like most of Russia's top men) do not give a damn about this thing -- i mean about what people say and think of him. The only person's opinion he cares about is putin and only as long as the latter is in the Kremlin. You are fundamentally mistaken in treating him as a church figure -- he is THE oldest nomenklatura (and i do not use the term pejoritively -- merely stating the fact) member still in office: just think of it for a sec -- since 1961 has he not known what it means to use public transport, stand in lines to buy food, have to bribe a doctor to get atrocious medical service... If you want to know this, I knew Komarov personally, albeit quite tangentially, in the early 90s and he never failed to strike me as a fanatical devotee of the Moscow Patriarchate and PA in particular. And he is far from being alone in his league: there are quite a few people (i am not talking about disgruntled clerics) who upon closer acquaintance were disgusted by what they saw -- not because there is something especially monstrous about him -- No, but by discovering that there is just NOTHING of any substance in him; he is just a self-obsessed actor without much acting talent. The above said was meant just to kind of explain myself as i have read assertions that "I hate" the subject -- that is not true: there's nobody there to hate and that is exactly the trouble. There are plenty of decent bishops in the ROC, but regrettably back in 1990 arguably the worst was chosen for reasons that are not difficult to discern, but that is an altogether different story... Sorry, i have to state that i do not intend to continue this debate here (unless there are some specific enquiries that had better be forwarded to my chat-page). Thanks every one!Muscovite99 (talk) 16:32, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
- Also, what you say about this having been a sham marriage is illogical. The Patriarch did not become exempt from the draft because he was married -- he became exempt because he was subsequently ordained a clergyman. He did not need to contract a sham marriage for that to happen. Unmarried men are ordained all the time, it's just that they may not subsequently get married. If the marriage was a sham... it was completely unnecessary, because the Patriarch found himself in the same boat at the end of the day... an unmarried clergyman, who can never marry and remain a clergyman. Also, it seems rather unlikely that the father of his wife would have participated so fully in such a sham. The article by Sidorenko also makes no suggestion that it was a sham marriage. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 14:29, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Yes, I am "talking theology and canons again", because when you insert claims that Patriarch Alexei's marriage violated the canons of the Church, you are "talking theology and canons"... not empirical facts. I am glad that you "accept what (I) have said here" about the fact that in this case the bishop were in fact applying economia. When economia is applied, there is no violation of the canons... no more so than if Congress passes a law that grants a special exception to some law to an individual in a particular circumstance is the law "violated". I note that you did not answer my question about what peer reviewed articles or book Komarov has had published on theology, Church history, or on the Canons. Having a theological degree does not make you an expert on these subjects any more than having a law degree makes you an expert on the law. A law degree makes you qualified to take the bar exam, but it does not make you an expert or an authority on the law.
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- Also, the problem with the link you have added to the "unexpurgated version" of this article, is that by definition this version is not a reliable source for an article on a living person. What is on that page is the form of the article that did not undergo an editorial process. WP:VERIFIABILITY states: "Articles should rely on reliable, third-party published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy." WP:Reliable Sources#Wikipedia does not publish original research states "Wikipedia does not publish original research or original thought." "The unexpurgated version" is unpublished by any reliable source. WP:BLP#Sources states: "Self-published books, zines, websites, and blogs should never be used as a source for material about a living person, unless written or published by the subject of the article." If you merely wanted to add a link to the photos, there are versions of the published article that have the photos which should be linked to instead. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:34, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Muscovite99, I came to similar concussions about Moskovskiye Novosti and Moscow News as you have mentioned in your point 1 above, when I was looking into Frjohnwhiteford's comments. There seems to be a number of reference available on line that could be used to clarify this in Wikipedia articles on these two sources. Do you know any one who might be interested in improving those articles so that their quality as references will be easier for other editors to see in Wikipedia? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jeepday (talk • contribs) 14:18, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, the articles are less than good. But then again, Moskovskiye Novosti has been shut down (they call it suspension). I might try to improve it when i have time.Muscovite99 (talk) 16:42, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
Assuming that this material is going to be left in the article, here is my proposed revision, which is more faithful to what is actually stated in the article, and provides more pertinent details:
- He married Vera Alekseesva, the daughter of a priest from Tallinn Georgi Alekseev, on April 11, 1950[2][3], on Tuesday of the Bright Week when marriages are normally prohibited according to Church tradition; however, permission was granted by Metropolitan Gregory of Leningrad, at the request of Bishop Roman of Tallinn and the fathers of both the bride and groom (both or whom were priests, and who concelebrated the marriage together). Moskovskie Novosti has alleged that according to a denunciation written by a priest-inspector Pariysky to the Leningrad Council of Religious Affairs, the marriage had been expedited in order for Ridiger to become a deacon and avoid being drafted into the Soviet Army (marriage is impossible after ordination in Orthodoxy). Up until 1950, seminarians were given a deferment from the draft, but in 1950 this was changed, and only clergy were exempt. For reason which have remained private, they divorced less than a year later.[2]
Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 13:13, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Residence
This section begins:
"The Patriarch's private residence is located in the village of Lukino (near Peredelkino) (originally it was meant as Patriarch Alexius I's dacha), now a western suburb of Moscow; it includes a 17th century church, a museum, and a spacious three-storey house built in the late 1990s."
No source is given to substantiate the comment about a dacha. The use of "dacha" has implications of extravagance which are not warranted.
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"On the residence compound there is a de-facto rotating women's monastery, according to the Patriarch's interview;[4]"
The source says nothing about a "de-facto rotating women's monastery." I think the whole thing is irrelevant, but if it is left in at all it should simply state "In the residence compound, there are a group of nuns who are in charge of household chores and duties."
Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:32, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
- More than a week having passed, and no reference having been provided to substantiate the comment about Patriarch Alexei I's "Dacha", and no defense of it remaining in the article having been presented, I have removed it as unsourced POV commentary. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:46, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- Telling about dacha is POV-pushing?! This is over the top. I think that Muscovite99 describes Alexius as a person by providing some interesting although minor details of his life. That is something a reader would like to know. That is what makes articles interesting. Let's respect each other's edits. We are looking for acompromise here.Biophys (talk) 16:52, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Muscovite99 has made it quite clear that he despises Patriarch Alexei. Throwing in the word "Dacha" is a loaded phrase that suggests an extravagant life-style. Furthermore, the assertion is entirely without substantiation. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 23:19, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- That may well be in Russian, but this is not a Russian article. In English, Dacha is never used in reference to a barn. Usually, it is used in reference to some rich Russians second or third home. See Dacha#Dachas of the elite.Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:21, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Re: Frjohnwhiteford: Actually, if you read the following source listed on the bottom of the Further Reading page of the link you provided, you will see that the article, [10] ("Dacha Wanna Be Russian?") explains what dachas are.
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- So what is a "dacha?" The word has made significant inroads into English because, although it can theoretically be translated as "summer house," or "cottage" the dacha is not necessarily that comfortable, leisurely symbol of affluence, or that picturesque image of country living...
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- ...But for many Russians, the dacha is still a simple home-away-from-home. Every weekend, many don large rubber boots (резиновые сапоги) and weed and care for their vegetable patches. They eat shashlik (a kind of barbeque on skewers), play outdoor games, go for walks and just relax. At night, they retire to what usually amounts to a simple wooden shack, often lacking running water and electricity. To many, this is a "return to the soil," to their roots and the ways of their forefathers.
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- If you are going to write cross-cultural articles (or articles that at least have some cross-cultural interfacing or require cross-cultural knowledge and understanding) for Wikipedia, I would recommend that you do three things: 1) learn to step into the culture you're writing about. If you forget to take of your "American" mindset and put on the mindset of the other culture, you are going to run into tremendous problems. Your example here is when you stated that "dacha" is a rich Russian's summer house. That is an American hearing a Russian word and imagining something based on American cultural pretexts; you should be an American hearing a Russian word and imagining something Russian based on the dominant meaning within the Russian culture. While I understand that the meaning of dacha is changing, as per the article cited from above, the "rich Russian's summer house" is not the dominant meaning. Learn to think outside of your own culture; I did it, so it can't be that difficult. 2) don't assume that everyone agrees with you. I happen to be an American. I just broke your use of the word "never" because I understand a dacha to be more akin to a hunter's shack than an extravagant McMansion somewhere in the wilderness. Then again, I suppose it helps that I took the time to educate myself many years ago. 3) don't be pretentious; you aren't a Russian living in Russia who is exposed to Russian speech, dialects, lexical and semantic structures, and various other elements that make a Russian uniquely Russian. Genuinely listen to what they say; they know their culture better than you do.--Sarienpalth (talk) 22:13, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
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- If this article were being written in Russian, I wouldn't be editing it. If my Russian was good enough to facilitate that, I would certainly defer to native speakers. But when an article is written in English, and we are talking about English usage, even if it is of a Russian loan word... it is the English usage that concerns us. Not how the word is used in Russian. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:43, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
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- You're right - we are concerned about using the word correctly, in context. We're not talking about reading/writing/speaking Russian, we're talking about using a Russian loan word correctly, as it is currently used in Russian culture so that we don't distort the meaning of the word when it's translated into English. Sarienpalth (talk) 11:07, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
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- It is not our job to correct common English usage here. If you want to start a crusade to fight the improper understanding of "dacha" as it is used in contemporary English, you are free to do so. And if you are successful in getting everyone to understand that a dacha can be a barn, or a shack, then we will have to take that into account... though I think it is rather obvious that the Patriarch's residence is neither a barn nor a shack. The phrase "Gung-ho" comes from Chinese it. It has one meaning in Chinese, and a related, but different meaning in English. In English, it is the English usage we must concern ourselves with. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:02, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
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- "Have to" is a rather absolute word. Many words do not "have to" have the meaning that they most commonly do in popular usage. "Prevent" can mean "to go before", but when you use that word, most people assume you mean to stop something from happening. In english, a dacha usually is used in reference to a summer or vacation home. I don't know about you, but anyone who has a home that they use for just one part of the year, is living rather high on the hog. In any case, there was no source for the statement in question, and so it doesn't much matter. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:37, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Once again, no it's not; most people who use that Russian loan word probably don't know what it is. Once again, you're assuming that a Russian dacha and a summer house in America/Britain/Austrailia are the same thing when they are not. Read the article Dacha Wanna Be Russian? at the bottom of the page that you cited and it will clearly illustrate that your position on the usage of the word is incorrect. Keep this up and you're going to throw your credibility as a neutral, culturally-sensitive, fact-seeking writer into question. Sarienpalth (talk) 11:07, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
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- See my comments above, and see also Dacha#Dachas of the elite. Since the question is a moot point, since the statement lacked any citation to substantiate it regardless of the meaning or implication of the word "dacha", I'm done discussing it. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:02, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Further Reading Section
This section is entirely one sided, and is unnecessary... that's what footnotes are for. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 01:34, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
- There having been no response after a week, I am deleting this section. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:58, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Health assertions
Just for reference here's the relevant section excerpted from the June, 2007, edition of the Russiam WP article, when the issue of his health was a hot issue.(it was subsequently removed, perhaps, unduly).
- == Состояние здоровья и сопряжённые с ним скандалы в СМИ ==
Cамый серьёзный инцидент, связанный со здоровьем, имел место в октябре 2002 в Астрахани, где Патриарх находился с визитом. После перенесённого тогда Патриархом тяжёлого инсульта, на Украине и в среде Русской Зарубежной Церковью стали распространятся слухи о некоем явлении ему в алтаре астраханского собора прп. Феодосия Печерского, который якобы сказал: «Отпали от Бога - ты и многие братья твои, и к диаволу припали, - произнес святой. - И правители Руси не правители уж суть, а кривители. И церковь потворствует им. И не стоять вам по правую руку от Христа. И ждет вас мука огненная, скрежет зубовный, страдания бесконечные, аще не опомнитесь, окаянные. Милость Господа нашего безгранична, но слишком долог для вас путь к спасению через искупление бесчисленных грехов ваших, а час ответа близок»[11]. Тогда пресс-служба ОВЦС Патриархии выступила с официальным опровержением, заявив, что «слухи злонамеренно распространяются противниками Церкви, заинтересованными во внесении смуты в умы верующих людей»[12].
27 апреля 2007 российские СМИ распространили информацию о резком ухудшении здоровья Патриарха, находящегося в Швейцарии [13][14][15][16].
Руководитель пресс-службы Патриархии о. Владимир Вигилянский заявил РИА Новости, что волна безосновательных слухов о тяжелом состоянии здоровья Патриарха, поднятая и распространяемая в Интернете в последние дни, «просто возмутительна»[17]. Отец Владимир предположил, что в информационной кампании о якобы имевшей место смерти Патриарха можно усмотреть и злой умысел, направленный на срыв подписания Акта о каноническом общении между Русской Зарубежной Церковью и Московским Патриархатом, намеченого на 17 мая 2007.
Уторм 2 мая 2007 Патриарх Алексий совершил литургию[5] в Воскресенском храме Покровского монастыря у Покровской Заставы в Москве и после богослужения заявил следующее: «Кому-то, видимо, хотелось испортить и отпуск, и лечение, а, может быть, кто-то распускал эти слухи в преддверии подписания акта о воссоединении Зарубежной церкви с матерью-Церковью, с Московским Патриархатом, в надежде, что они отразятся на его подписании»; «никакого аортошунтирования у меня никогда не было, и не было никакой клинической смерти, иначе бы я сегодня не служил здесь, как и было намечено до отпуска»[6]
3 мая 2007 Владимир Вигилянский заявил, что главный редактор радио «Эхо Москвы» Алексей Венедиктов и главный редактор газеты «Московский комсомолец» Павел Гусев, распространявшие слухи о смерти или тяжкой болезни Патриарха, должны уйти в отставку: Template:Начало цитаты Это не какая-то нелепая ошибка интерпретации, как мы поначалу думали; теперь в произошедшем твердо видны злые намерения. Одной из целей клеветы могло быть желание посеять смуту в отношении подписания Акта о Воссоединении Русской Православной Церкви заграницей с матерью-Русской Православной Церковью. С другой стороны, целью клеветнической пиар-кампании могло быть желание проверить, как будет себя вести Церковь и архиереи, лишившись архипастыря.<...>
Я не виню даже сами издания в целом, а виню конкретных людей, стоящих за газетой «Московский комсомолец» и за радио «Эхо Москвы». Это их затея, и, как сказал сегодня сам Святейший Патриарх, это не что иное, как «злая воля людей». Поэтому я считаю, что Алексей Венедиктов, главный редактор «Эха Москвы», и Павел Гусев, главный редактор «Московского комсомольцы» должны подать в отставку. В суд на них мы подавать не будем, но о том, что они нечестные люди и что они поддержали самые гнусные слухи, я заявить не боюсь. В том, что они вообще когда-нибудь извинятся, я сильно сомневаюсь, так как подобные люди считают извинения проявлением слабости.[7] Template:Конец цитаты
И г-н Венедиктов, и г-н Гусев отвергли требования о. Владимира Вигилянского. Г-н Венедиктов, в частности, заявил: «в эфире сообщение о Патриархе звучало так: "Как сообщают источники Эхо Москвы, Патриарх находится на лечении в Швейцарии. Наши источники сообщают, что его состояние довольно сложное. Однако источники в Патриархии говорят, что они разговаривали с Патриархом в 13:00 по местному времени и все в порядке»; «пресс-служба Патриархии, которая должна была объяснить это [отсутствие Патриарха] верующим, гражданам, этого не сделала, а теперь пытается переложить свою плохую работу на журналистов, которые искали информацию и получали ее ото всюду, кроме пресс-службы Патриархии»[18]
Г-н Гусев назвал претензии Патриархии "абсолютно безосновательными", добавив: «Прежде всего хочу отметить, что у нас светское государство. И хотя, конечно, у нас свобода слова, и каждый может говорить все, что угодно, негоже официальному представителю церкви заниматься такими вопросами»; «когда эти слухи про Патриарха распространялись по Москве, Патриархия их не опровергала, а просто молчала, тем самым только усугубляя ситуацию. Поэтому ее пресс-секретарь в таком случае сам должен уйти в отставку»[8].
Высказываются предположения, что ложный слух мог быть санкционирован в Кремле[9]; или спровоцирован недовольными процессом воссоединения б. подполковником КГБ Константином Преображенским, Евгением Магеровским и М. Назаровым[10].
3 мая представитель пресс-службы Московской патриархии сообщил, что Патриарх Алексий не будет подавать в суд на СМИ, распространявшие ложные сведения о его болезни и даже смерти[11] Muscovite99 (talk) 19:44, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
- The claim that the Patriarch had died was a hoax, see WHO ORGANIZED THE PROVOCATIVE RUMORS ON EVE OF 17 MAY?. He supposedly had died just days prior to my seeing him in Moscow, serving three very long liturgies in one week. This sort of thing has no place in this article. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 00:19, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
- Whatever it was, it was a hot POLITICAL issue in Moscow for several weeks thereafter, as such "hoaxes" are not possible by expedience of some disgruntled kids. The fact of media reports is quite significant, as most analysts in Moscow concurred that some very highly-placed persons in Putin's administration were quite unhappy with PA II (Speculations usually fingured Sobyanin). I am not suggesting placing all these specuations into the article, but a mention of such reports is perfectly justified, in my view. By the way, in Russia popular belief is that if a person has been reported dead while being alive, it is a very good omen for him: there'll be many happy returns...Muscovite99 (talk) 19:42, 8 February 2008 (UTC) Pushkov'a and Vigilyansky's chat is just their spin on the matter.Muscovite99 (talk) 19:44, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Well, it was not entirely a hoax as he was indeed in a Swiss hospital when the reports came through, either undergoing a routine medical check-up or an operation. In fact, the report seems to have originated with the Moskovsky Komsomolets web site (the distinction with the print paper is of consequence as these are 2 different editorial boards) and then spread mostly through i-net media. The media scandal was mostly stoked by the fact that the Patriarchate's press service was very tight-lipped for several days, apparently unwilling to confirm the very fact of PA II being in a Swiss hospital, before having to do so. Thus most of the vituperation eventually was not against PA but against Vigilyansky who is in charge of MP PR. Another point is a true serious health-related incident prior to that -- in October 2002 in Astrakhan (See the first para of the Russian text above): he barely showed up for a few months after. Therefore, some qualification is in order in addition to merely stating hid current good health.Muscovite99 (talk) 18:38, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
- The fact that it happened weeks before reconciliation with with ROCOR was, I suspect, not entirely coincidental, and the people responsible for spreading it were in many cases those who were opposed to that reconciliation (e.g. portal credo... staffed largely by adherents of a splinter group of a splinter group) who hoped to scare people by the specter of the uncertainty that would result from this at this critical point in that process. But at the end of the day, it was in fact a hoax... why it was spread is debatable. There is no reason to mention it at all, but if it is mentioned, it should be mentioned as a hoax... since that is in fact what it was. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 06:58, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
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- The fact that he saw the doctor is a far cry from the reports that he died on the operating table (three times, as I recall). He was in excellent health when I saw him days later... and even Credo-Portal was ashamed, and attempting to exonerate themselves of responsibility. What could be the possible justification of mentioning such nonsense in this article? Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 05:12, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Dear john, in all frankness, i do NOT mean to offend you in any way, but i already read that you had seen the subject once about half a dozen times. Can you explain what this fact proves or disproves, please. I saw Clinton a couple of times, read hundreds of books and articles on the US politics (in fact passed several University exams on the subject), but i would never dare interpolate into the US policy discussion issues with Americans. Because what i learnt very well from my many years of interacting with foreigners (mostly Americans) both professionally and privately is this: THEY (even if they are rednecks from a Midwest desert) know better than me, FOR they are part of it and i am always a bystander; and the stupidest thing i can possibly do is start lecturing them on the relative virtues of Clinton vs Bush or suchlike. I know full well what "exotic" religions such as Russian Orthodoxy mean in the US -- they are viewed as national (from ancestral motherland) patrimony, or as just that (exotica) by converts/fans. Whereas in the RF it is part of the actual mainstream political/social/philosophical discourse and struggle. And this discourse is waged by people who have very high awareness of Russia's immediate background (that is Communist); for the people here, the fact that a person was at all allowed to travel to a "capitalist country" means he had joined the Soviet nomenklatura. (Just for you to understand: when there was a mere possibility that my mum could be seconded as a teacher to Mongolia ("a socialist country"), she was immediately told to seek to join the Communist Party, to start with). And for such a person to explore the fleshpots on his own in Paris -- i shall tell you in all honesty, i only know of one other Soviet citizen who was permitted to do this kind of thing -- the late Metropolitan Pitirim (Nechayev), who would normally don his civilian clothes for such occasions. This is a kind of thing that was absolutely unthinkable even for very senior Party bosses: Gorbachev, in his own words, got a glimpse of western store selection of sausages only when he was already a politburo member and was duly shocked and instantly converted (to capitalism). You ignore all this, which is perfectly alright, if you were writing an article on your Oklohoma-City parish, but this article is not about your parish's boss (as some have pointed out here) -- it is, above all, about the Soviet-era bishop, Yeltsin and Putin-era Russia' patriarch (in fact, a modern RF politician). And you keep believing that your private viewpoint is the absolute truth, which is very Russian-Orthodox, of course, but this is a secular multinational resource here.Muscovite99 (talk) 19:40, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- If it was not a hoax, why was Portal-Credo running away from it so fast and hard in the article I posted? What my eye witness testimony proves is that the story was bogus, because people who die three times on the operating table generally do not stand and serve through multiple services of between 3 to 5 hours a piece within days of that event. I saw him up close, received communion from twice, and spoke with him (through a translator), once, and he was clearly in very good health, and does not look at all his age. Your conclusions about Patriarch Alexei eating onion soup in Paris are neither here nor there, unless you have reliable sources that voice those conclusions as well. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 22:38, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- I am not placing any of my "conclusions" in the article, to start with. The soup was mentioned by the Patriarch himself in the interview that is placed on the official MP web site. For some reason the MP officials (and the Patriarch himself) believe that this is worth mentioning. My point essentially is that you seek to impose your personal view (which you are perfectly entitled to have and share) on every one else, which is not in the spirit of the WP, or any productive discussion.Muscovite99 (talk) 19:57, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] More original research and POV pushing.
Muscovite99's edit summary for the inserted text that I just undid reads as follows: "Recovered the bit about the dish - it may appear trivial, but quite revealing in many ways (a Sov citizen being allowed to explore parisian resrants on HIS OWN is sth else".
This shows that Muscovite99 is attempting to make a point that goes beyond the source he is citing, which is original research and POV pushing. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 05:09, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
- I think this has nothing to do with POV pushing. Muscovite simply described a life style of this person. That is something a reader would like to know. Also, the deletion of "Futher reading" is unacceptable. Please wait for consensus opinion of others before deletions.Biophys (talk) 17:26, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
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- After a week since the last time I argued that the "Further Reading" section was redundant, and one-sided, you have not made the slightest argument in favor of retaining it. Now, the burden is on you to build a consensus to re-insert it. I have already taken the issue to this talk page... even to this minute, you have not offered any defense for why this should be included. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:00, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- First off, the interview does not say French Onion Soup is his favorite dish... only that he likes it. Secondly, Muscovite99's edit summary demonstrates that he was not merely interested in noting the Patriarch's taste in food. Are we next going to talk about his favorite color? Even in Paris, one must eat. Paris is known for having good food. So what? There is nothing here that is note worthy. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 02:58, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- Please see my comment about "Dacha" above. Providing minor personal details is important. This make an article interesting. We do not want a boring copy of his official biography here.Biophys (talk) 16:57, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
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- We also don't want to spice it up with innuendo, half truths, and one-sided accounts of his life. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:25, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- See my post above this section.Muscovite99 (talk) 19:59, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- We also don't want to spice it up with innuendo, half truths, and one-sided accounts of his life. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:25, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Closing Arguments on French Onion Soup
I am going to ask Jeepday for a ruling on this point, but want to give everyone a final chance to cite the policies that support their position. I am opposed to the inclusion of this text because it involved original research (WP:OR), since Muscovite99 is clearly attempting to make a point that is not supported by the source, as is clear from his edit summary when he re-inserted the text in question. It also is contrary to WP:Handling trivia#Stand-alone trivia, which cites as an example of information that is too unimportant to warrant inclusion the following:
- "However, in some cases, the information is just too unimportant. For instance, a note like "Alan Smithee's favorite color is yellow" cannot be integrated into the text without distracting from it (in other words, it's trivia no matter how it is presented, and should therefore be removed)."
I think there is a very clear parallel between Alan Smithee's favorite color, and Patriarch Alexei having a taste for French Onion Soup. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 00:34, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Ruling on French Onion Soup
To address the question of the soup. While only Frjohnwhiteford has posted policies to support their side of the argument, I have looked through the talk above. What I see is an argument that there is not a reference that says "French Onion Soup is his favorite dish... only that he likes it" and a good argument not to include it per WP:Handling trivia#Stand-alone trivia. All parties involved in the discussion have valid perspectives to include or not include the piece, but only policy to not include was offered, the rest was tends to fall under WP:ILIKEIT which is recognized as not a valid argument in Wikipedia:Arguments to avoid in deletion discussions. The edit summary provided when the piece in question was added does not appear to meet the expectations of Use of edit summaries in disputes Editors should beware of what they are communicating in their edit summaries and review Help:Edit summary#Recommendations as appropriate. Jeepday (talk) 14:13, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Footnotes
- ^ Интервью Святейшего Патриарха Алексия ежедневной газете «Газета». «Загородную резиденцию в полной мере ощущаю своим домом».
- ^ a b c d Wife of the Patriarch, by Evgeniy Sidorenko, Moscow News, № 21 (2001-05-22)
- ^ Евгений Сидоренко. Замужем за Патриархом Same article, but with the original photographs of the printed article.
- ^ Интервью Святейшего Патриарха Алексия ежедневной газете «Газета». «Загородную резиденцию в полной мере ощущаю своим домом».
- ^ 55 лет со дня кончины блаженной Матроны Московской - sedmitza.ru
- ^ Патриарх с иронией ответил на утверждения СМИ о своей кончине, но серьезно оценил возможные мотивы этого демарша - Newsru.com
- ^ Пресс-секретарь Патриарха считает, что Венедиктов и Гусев должны уйти в отставку: сайт журнала Фома.
- ^ Главный редакторы "Эха Москвы" и "Московского комсомольца" обвиняют пресс-службу Московской патриархии в непрофессионализме: Интерфакс Религия
- ^ Александр Солдатов. Профилактические слухи. По народным приметам, если человека досрочно "похоронили", значит, он будет жить долго. Кто и зачем запустил мрачную "утку" о смерти Патриарха?
- ^ Тайна заговора против патриарха: газета Твой день, 2 Мая 2007
- ^ Патриарх не будет подавать в суд на СМИ за сообщения о его смерти
[edit] my view, summarized
which you may or may not follow. I find it inconceivable that anyone who knows the soviet system could think that Alexius II was not considerably involved with the KGB, and the question is only to what extent he was, how honest his claims of trying to ameliorate it are, & the degree of moral culpability involved. But this is not provable, and short of events like those in East German is not likely to be. As people can have very strong reasons for thinking one way or the other, they resort to discussions of other aspects of his character, which are at most trivial compared to the essential matters. But I appreciate the cleverness -- however unconstructive -- with which one or another position has been argued here.
I think insinuation raises questions of BLP, and the present version approved by my colleague here is not acceptable. I respect his judgment in these matters at least as much as my own, but we disagree; as I see it he's going by the rules literally, and I by their intentions, and we each think that our method of looking at it is right. I hold to my own position. I think none the worse of him for his. DGG (talk) 04:17, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- Could you elaborate please what exactly you think is not acceptable in present version? Almost everything seems to be supported by sources.Biophys (talk) 05:38, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- I think I have said clearly enough that the details of his marriage or his housekeeping, supported by sources or not, amount to excessive weight, and come under BLP--although not explicit condemnations, the negative intent is clear to me & I think it is to you as well. It is a matter of opinion on how to apply BLP in this instance, and I have given mine. When my opinion is asked for, I give it. What weight other people assign it, is up to them. I do not use admin powers in a matter where another respected admin disagrees. DGG (talk) 22:16, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Alexei and politics
A few interesting things in this article. Could be interesting. Malick78 (talk) 09:41, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] NPOV Flag
At this point, I would be in favor of removing the NPOV flag from the article. There is more we need to do with the article, but as it stands right now, I think it is about as close to being NPOV as it is likely to get. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 23:55, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
- On second thought, I think perhaps the two issues I raise below should be addressed prior to removing the NPOV flag -- though aside from those two points (and keeping in mind that there is more information on his tenure as Patriarch that can and should be added) I think we have a relatively balanced article now. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:51, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Sotnikova Controversy
Given that awhile back, even Muscovite99 conceded that this controversy was over blown:
- "As for Sotnikova, it has blown over, by and large. The whole thing was blown out of proportion by her business rivals. She was indeed fairly close to him at the turn of century but no more."
And given that what we have in this section has a lot to to do with Sotnikova, and little to do with Patriarch Alexei, I would argue that it should be removed, or moved to an article on Sotnikova. As it currently stands, I think this section gives far too much weight to the controversy, and is contrary to WP:UNDUE. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:36, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
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- Looks like a solid reason for removal, a proposal was made and a reasonable time allowed for rebuttal. Without looking into the details of the content or references. It appears that John had a what he believed to be valid reason and probable consensus before removing the text. Looks like Bio waited until the edit was made before objecting [19] while, this is his right, it is unreasonable given the history on this article. Questions of content should be addressed on the talk page not in edit summaries while reverting another editors announced change. Additionally Bio did not make any edits on the talk page to address John's concerns, then or now. I would think leaving it removed while discussing the value it could add to the article would be appropriate. This is a question of process not content. If the editors here can come to consensus to restore all or part of the text that is fine, if not you can leave it out, or ask me to for tie breaker. I have re-remove the content as John did in this edit Jeepday (talk) 02:14, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Quote from Preobrazhensky's ever forthcoming book
I would argue that this quote is also given undue weight, and violates WP:UNDUE:
- According to Konstantin Preobrazhenskiy, Alexius II did not privately deny his involvement with the KGB and told to Oleg Kalugin: “Why are you exaggerating what happened? Yes, we collaborated with the KGB, even I did. But it was a struggle for peace, for disarmament! There’s nothing wrong with that!”
My reasons for taking this position are:
1. The book has been "forthcoming" for nearly a year now. As it is, it is not published, and we don't know what the final form will be.
2. We have Preobrazhensky's characterization of a conversation that was related to him by Oleg Kalugin... and so it is hearsay upon hearsay, and unless it was corroborated by an independent source (i.e., some source other than Preobrazhensky or Kalugin who claimed to have heard similar statements from Patriarch Alexei), it is highly questionable, and poorly sourced. In accordance with WP:Verifiability#Exceptional claims require exceptional sources, either better sources are needed, or it should be removed. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 12:42, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
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- Supporting the process of removal same as in #Sotnikova Controversy above. Re-removing text if you want to have a content discussion have it on the talk page not in the edit summary. Once again this is a question of process not content, if you can't reach consensus on the content let me know. Jeepday (talk) 02:24, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Final arguments on the aforementioned two issues
I waited a week for a response, and then took the actions I mentioned above. I still have no reply, but Biophys has reverted my edits with only the following edit summary "Restoring perfectly sourced texts. No any reasonable justification to remove these sourced texts was provided at talk page." I would point out that I provided reasons, and so far he has provided no counter arguments. I will ask Jeepday for a ruling, but will give him and anyone else one more chance to actually state a counter argument before I do so. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:47, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
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- Simply providing sources is not sufficient to warrant inclusion. The text must also be relevant, and not given undue weight. If you can find other sources that independently verify that Patriarch Alexei made statements such as the one cited by Preobrazhensky, then please present them here, and let's discuss them. As for the other issue, even Muscovite99 again it was much ado about nothing. Frjohnwhiteford (talk) 03:56, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Creating controversy on homosexuality
It is absolutely essential to present not only the view of those who support homosexual behavior and lifestyles, but the actual views of the Patriarch and Orthodox Church - what happened in the previous versions amounted to an attack on his views without seeking to understand what they actually are. Without an understanding of the historical and current views of traditional Christianity, at the very least the Orthodox and Catholic Churches, one presents an unbalanced straw man that will discredit the view as soon as the inquirer actually comes into contact with what the Orthodox Church's teachings are. Surely even a liberal committed to gay rights can see this. In my edit I left the hostile claims in place and merely added the view of the Orthodox Church, which of course Alexei (Alexius) shares. http://www.oca.org/DOCmarriage.asp?SID=12&ID=26