User talk:PastorDavid

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[edit] Feedback: "Christian Church"

PastorDavid, Nswinton nominated you as a good person to get feedback from. I hope you don't mind my pestering you. I was hoping you might be able to give input on the newly revised Christian Church article (still a work in progress). Some specific questions.

• Is the current scope of the article appropriate (i.e. should it be broader, narrower, etc.)?
• Does the organization of the article support the topic well?
• Have I kept the descriptions neutral enough? I have tried really hard to make the article fair and accessible to all Christian sects as well as non-Christians.
• If you have not seen I recently merged the One, Holy, Catholic, and Apostolic Church into the Christian Church article. At least one editor has objected strenuously to this. I *believe* the objection is largely on the grounds that the CC article should be much broader than it is now and the OHCAC article should be very specific (honestly I still don't understand the argument fully). You can see the discussion on the Talk page. Any thoughts on this subject?

Thanks.

--Mcorazao 16:46, 26 May 2007 (UTC)