Talk:Parapterois
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An entry from Parapterois appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 14 April 2007. |
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[edit] Peer review
Nice work on this article! Here's my minor comments:
[edit] Lead section
- may be known as the -- It is, or isnt, or is occassionally known as.... "may" sounds odd to me.
- is poorly known. -- sounds odd to me. Is poorly studied?
[edit] Taxonomy
Good. but it later joined Parapterois was moved to maybe?
[edit] Appearance
- Wikify different fin types
- cm for centimetres
[edit] Distribution
- On the other hand change to "In contrast,"
[edit] In the aquarium
- P. heterura can be found on certain online marine aquarium fish stores, but is not common. No reference? Wonder if needed.
- Other aquarium care issues? Compatability? etc. Recommend minor expansion of this section
[edit] Other comments
- No information on diet, reproduction, sexual dimorphism, predators? though my very limited searches suggest there's not a lot known about the species.
Hope this helps a bit! Cheers, David. MidgleyDJ 06:55, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
- It does. After looking at some other articles I realized this article has a long way to go. By WP:MOSNUM, I think the units shouldn't be abbreviated unless inside parentheses. I didn't reference the online marine aquarium fish stores thing. I can definitely find these stores, but referencing a store doesn't seem quite right. I suppose this may count as original research if I can't find a reference, though. MiltonT 17:13, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
