Talk:Pakistani presidential election, 2007/Comments

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The article lacks coherence. As I don't know much about the internal politics of Pakistan, I would suggest somebody improve the article and present it in a better manner. Silly fellow 17:04, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

There is a distinct lack of a NPOV in this article - needs tidying as it reads as if it supports Nawaz Sharif in places. Also some of the grammar is terrible. Old Nol 17:41, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

The grammar and sentence structure is horrible - it needs to be cleaned up so readers can understand. (74.115.212.16 18:20, 6 October 2007 (UTC))