Talk:Oregon Public Library
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[edit] GA review comments
I've reviewed the article against the WP:GA criteria and have the following comments:
- Very minor, but the flow of the first para in the lead is a bit stilted, I'd flow a couple of the sentences together to make the prose a bit easier to read.
- Not keen on "Early on...", can this be tightened up?
But these aren't going to stop it being a GA. The Rambling Man 14:39, 13 July 2007 (UTC)