Talk:One Flew South

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[edit] A little review

• The infobox mentions Nashville, Tennessee, but Nashville nor Tennessee are mentioned in the article itself, besides that it's in the name of their label. This seems odd.
• If I'm not mistaken musical groups are usually referred to in plural, see e.g. Pink Floyd.
• The lead mentions the word debut twice. It might be better to call the album the "first (studio?) album" instead.
• The second sentence of the biography sections should start with a capital, and the third sentence doesn't flow well.
• The prose uses too many semicolons for my liking. Four in one paragraph is just too much.

User:Krator (t c) 15:56, 10 June 2008 (UTC)