Talk:Once Upon a Time in the West

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Contents 1 What a mess... 2 How am I doing...and the DVD release... 3 Citations... 4 Characters 5 Link 6 Nice 7 Harmonica's Tearing of Jill's Dress

[edit] What a mess...

This article is a mess...whoever gave it a B-rating?

There's no chronological order to the chapts...no synopsis...no cast listing...geez.

There should be a spearate section for the finally released DVD, with all its bonus material.

Come on!

If I wasn't involved in other projects I'd take it on myself...who's the main watchdog on this film?

trezjr 03:05, 4 October 2006 (UTC)

Also, the picture of the "final shootout" should be removed, or at least changed. Anyone who knows anything about guns knows that ***FREAKING SPOILER!*** the only reason Frank would be facing away from Harmonica is because he got shot. Otherwise, they'd be facing each other. If there's a picture of them facing off, it should replace this one.

[edit] How am I doing...and the DVD release...

Started some badly needed clean-up on this article tonight.

How about someone writing up a chapter on the DVD release of the film that also encompasses the 2nd included disc of special features?

trezjr 00:44, 23 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Citations...

...please respond to citation requests immediately as these items will be removed this week.

trezjr 00:51, 23 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Characters

Okay, so I tackled the DVD version.

Would someone like to write up a profile of each of the main characters--like on the Harry Potter movie pages?

trezjr 02:54, 23 October 2006 (UTC)

If this is a "spaghetti western", I will call myself "Noodles" <eg> --80.136.162.247 07:21, 25 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Link

Maybe I'm wrong but the link for the still photographs of monument valley demands a password!!!! Shouldn't everybody be allowed to see them? I think this should be changed! 83.191.179.158 18:13, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Nice

Wow, good job removing almost everything informative from the article. --Kaizer13 (talk) 10:19, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Harmonica's Tearing of Jill's Dress

Someone deleted the description of the scene where Harmonica begins to sexually assault Jill. He or she wrote that Harmonica "tears the lace from her dress to make it appropriate for mourning." This is an obvious falsity. Is this supposed to be funny? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.29.128.130 (talk) 18:43, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

I dunno anymore man. Somewhere along the way, my plot summary got weird. --Kaizer13 (talk) 12:40, 9 May 2008 (UTC)