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Poetic Elements: 1. “A goose's quill has put an end to murder”. A goose’s quill can only be used to write, it can’t end murder. However, this example of personification means much more. I think that this personification has to relate with treaties. A treaty, although it is nothing more than a piece of paper physically, it can mean the world to many people. The signature of a treaty, by a goose’s quill, can cause the end of murder. It is used to convey how strong a signature is and emphasize its power. 2. “A hand rules pity as a hand rules heaven” This would happen to be a simile. This simile is meant to show, in my opinion, that there isn’t right or wrong. There isn’t defined good or badness in this world. The same person, who controls goodness, is like the same person who controls badness in our world and many people forget that. I think that it was a good way to shift the reader’s opinion at the very end. 3. “The hand that signed the treaty bred a fever”. This is even more personification. I think that it means that the people who signed the treaty caused so much more trouble than goodness. I also believe that the poet tried to wrap things up in a bang, and this happened to do it. It works with the beginning personification.

Shaun Carland The Death of A King Haiku

Who killed King? Like King He had something to prove and He was just confused.

Shaun Carland A Curtain One Window…

One window is all I need to find happiness One window is all I need to solve conflict One window is all I need to to see the inside of people One window is all I need to prove myself One window is all I need to give me guidance

I have my window. But a curtain is covering it.

Shaun Carland Anyday, Someday. Someday Poem


Someday I will obtain my drivers license Someday my self esteem will rise higher than the building I am confined in. Someday I will create life. Someday I will find someone who loves me. Someday I will find someone who will love me. Someday everyone will be able to express themselves. Someday our eyes will finally open.