Talk:O. B. Montessori Center

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This article was nominated for deletion in the past. The result of the discussion was no consensus.

This article never mentions the women at all in the first two paragraphs. The article uses himself, he, his, mankind and the likes, never mentioning the women here at all. Is it that women are not part of our culture? Or is this just being a Chauvinist? The last time I checked women were part of our world also. Maybe I miss something, like women do not go to school or need and education. This is how to write an article when refering to both genders; he/she, his/hers, man/women, etc... I hope this will help you in your future articles about education or any other topics. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 195.39.128.126 (talk)

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I am assessing this article for WikiProject Schools. Potentially an important school article, more references are needed to confirm some of the statements made. Also needs a clean-up to meet WP:MOS. Camaron1 | Chris 16:04, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

I have removed the history section as it was a copyright violation. Camaron1 | Chris 09:42, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

I have reverted the article to an earlier version before mass new text was added - it seemed mostly unencyclopedic and looked like a copy vio. Some of the text added could be good contributions - those will need to be wikified if re-added. Camaron1 | Chris 22:02, 30 September 2007 (UTC) I removed trivia per tag--English836 00:54, 17 October 2007 (UTC)