Talk:North Halton Highlanders

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[edit] Inappropriate tone tag

I put the tag up. It's a good article with some basic information on the club. My basic problem with it is that it uses the word we too many times. A better tone would be to refer to the club in third person. I don't have time to edit it tonight; within a week or two, I'll be coming back, and if it hasn't been edited, I'll do some cleanup. That said, a big thank-you to the author for getting the article started and the information out! C.Fred 02:01, 2 February 2006 (UTC)