Talk:Norskedalen

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[edit] Possible rewrite based on the Norskedalen website

I started this article. Unfortunately, someone rewrote it with information from the Norskedalen website. I believe someone from Norskadalen rewrote the article using their website. Thanks-RFD 16:04, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Pov concerns

This article sounds like a press release and needs to replace peacock terms like 'great' and 'valuable' with verifiable, cited facts. If you have any questions about this, ask me on my talk page. --Gimme danger 18:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] My apologies

As a new contributor, I am learning as I go. I reread the NPOV guidelines and understand the concerns about 'peacock' or 'advertising' type language vs. language suitable to an encyclopedia. I will attempt to edit and welcome your help. The facts about Norskedalen, its pioneer immigrant history and its natural environment located in a coulee in the driftless region of Wisconsin are 'colorful' enough on their merit. WalkingE 20:42, 16 August 2007 (UTC)