Talk:Norfolkline

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Lots of commas are missing, language is bad as the sentences are way to long and structured in a bad way, the authors refer to themselves by using "our managed contract" and similar sentence parts, the references/links point to the same location.

I already changed "their" to "there", the first one being a possessive pronoun and the latter one being an indicator for locations. This shouldn't ever happen to anyone to mix up these two very different words.

Actually, the whole article is not very well structured, giving all information in the section "History". Astonishingly, it does not provide information on other things than company sales and its steady growing.

Besides, it lacks information about quality, prices, recommendations, competitors, quality of service.

After having read this text, I cannot decide on whether to use this ferry, nor do I possess any new references than the one I already had.

In order to sum up, I strongly recommend declaring this article as "deprecated", "needs much cleanup and content". 84.56.242.78 20:01, 28 August 2007 (UTC)