Talk:Nicholas de Balmyle

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	Nicholas de Balmyle has been listed as one of the Philosophy and religion good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can delist it, or ask for a reassessment.
	An entry from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on January 11, 2008.
February 7, 2008 Good article nominee Listed

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject Medieval Scotland.
GA	This article has been rated as GA-Class on the assessment scale.
Mid	This article is on a subject of mid-importance within medieval Scottish studies.

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   The prose could stand some further work before the article is promoted much beyond GA. For example, the use of semicolons should be curtailed (there are three sentences in a row with semicolons at one point), and more caution should be utilized with commas. You may also want to reconsider the arrangement of headings. The entire article is a biography, so I don’t see any reason to designate that as a first-level heading.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I am placing the article on hold in the expectation that the problems mentioned above can be cleaned up. jackturner3 (talk) 15:21, 30 January 2008 (UTC)

Addressed the concerns. Hopefully to your satisfaction. Regards, Deacon of Pndapetzim (Talk) 01:12, 5 February 2008 (UTC)