Talk:NEXUS (frequent traveller program)
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[edit] Rephrase to remove advertisement-like tone
I rephrased pretty much the whole document to make it read less like a government brochure advertising NEXUS, and more like a Wikipedia article (at the suggestion of the previous editor). I tried to avoid any obvious Americanisms (is 'traveler' acceptable in Canada, or only 'traveller'?), and to say the same thing but in fewer words and with less government jargon ('marine mode', anyone?).
69.149.116.144 23:24, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
Is Nexus really a government project or is it actually a commercial project? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.108.195.30 (talk) 03:38, 13 December 2007 (UTC)