Talk:Newark, New Jersey/Comments

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Rated GA A great deal of content with pictures included. Articles needs to be condensed and brought in line with format.

  1. Use properly formatted references. WP:CITET
  2. Eliminate Noted Newarkers list.
  3. Reduce usage of subsections in favor of complete paragraphs under the main heading.
  4. Remove px sizing and left placement flags from thumbnail images to improve readability of text.
  5. A skyline picture from a clear day would be nice.
  6. Apply WP:EL guideline.
  7. Apply WP:LEAD guideline.

Alan.ca 11:23, 7 March 2007 (UTC)