Talk:New York State Route 321

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Good article New York State Route 321 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can delist it, or ask for a reassessment.
May 18, 2008 Good article nominee Listed
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[edit] GA review

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    The writing should be much better. Almost every sentence in the lead and the route description begins with "Route 32...". Also, the lead could be trimmed down a little bit, as right now it is equal to over a third of the total article size. Additionally, some of the links are redirects
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    Seems accurite, well sourced.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Ditto.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
    Yep.
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    An image of the actual road would be nice, but it's fine.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Everything seems fine except for the writing, which still has a while to go before being considered good. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:40, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

All done according my recent edits.Mitch32contribs 22:01, 18 May 2008 (UTC)