Talk:Neutron Star (story)

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I've removed " Satisfying, albeit scientifically flawed" from the body of this article for two reasons. Firstly, although Niven's work is generally hard SF, it is, nonetheless, fiction- it is redundant to point out every instance of scientific fallacy in a fictional story. Second, nothing was included in the original article that detailed what exactly was flawed; if anyone can give valid scientific reasons that the end was innaccurate, it would be constructive to create a new section that details what could be corrected.EvilMrWizard 01:46, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

I've expanded the synopsis of "Neutron Star" to be more complete and descriptive of the storyline. Most of the original text was moved to the top. - John 06:00, 19 June 2006 (UTC)