Talk:National Task Force

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[edit] Needs to be rewritten

At first glance this article seems quite amateurish and I feel that it needs to be rewritten. Some things worth pointing out include:

  • The abbreviation "NI" is used 10 times
  • Poor vocabulary
  • Sentences don't flow smoothly
  • Complete lack of references/sources and external links to back up claims


I've tried to improve the grammar & spelling along with a few other things which is really all I'm capable of doing right now.


Anybody here willing to help out? Thanks. --Shisha 10:23, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Sources

As far as I've been able to find out, this article is based on two sources: The official web page of the Swedish Police [1] and an article from "Kustjägarveteranernas tidning" (The Newsletter of Swedish Coastal Ranger Veterans) No 23 (March 1998). [[2]

I haven't been able too find any claims that are wrong, but unfortunately there is very little information available on the NI. The greatest problem is the paragraph on organization which may have changed a whole lot since 1998. 84.219.1.136 16:38, 13 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Rewrite

I rewrote the page to give it an easier-to-read style, and I changed some grammar mistakes. I'm doing my best to find information on the topic in English, since I can't read Sweedish and I'm sure that most of you can't either. I think that all we need now in the way of a cleanup is references, though. Any and all input is welcome. Insane99 20:25, 21 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] OR/References

I changed the OR tag to a REFERENCES tag. RJFJR 13:48, 7 April 2007 (UTC)