Talk:Murder of Rachel McLean

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[edit] Rank?

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On April 28, Detective Bound, now convinced that McLean was dead, [...]

In British police forces, there is no rank of "Detective" (see this), so what is the correct rank? (Perhaps it's safer just to say "Police" or "investigating officers".) --RFBailey (talk) 04:00, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

That's the wording that was used, but it was one of the most poorly-written articles (the section was a timeline, to be precise) I've read. Any decent grammar was a bonus. - Dudesleeper / Talk 16:24, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

I've rephrased it, using "police" as the opearative word. --RFBailey (talk) 22:15, 30 April 2008 (UTC)