Talk:Muhammad Ali Naqvi

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This article is insufficiently subjective. Specifically, the subject is said to have been "martyred" as opposed to a more neutral term like "murdered", "assasinated" or "killed".

In addition, those responsible for his death are referred to as "government agency terrorists." Not only is no source cited for such a controversial claim, but the agency involved isn't named and the highly subjective term "terrorist" is the only other information the reader is given on the motives and identities of those involved.

This article could be greatly improved by changing the language to be more neutral and providing sources. If the information is correct, then proof should be provided to remove all doubt.

Jeppa (talk) 03:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)Jeppa--Jeppa (talk) 03:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)