Talk:Moye W. Stephens/Comments

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This article needs major work and I have begun it. Stephens was notable for two things: piloting Richard Halliburton around the world, and co-founding Northrop. All the rest is either background for general aviation history, or family feel-good fluff. It appears mostly unsourced, in that the extensive outlinks are to websites that feature the named person or thing, without necessarily providing any proof of the assertion they appear next to. Clearly, the finding and addition of such outlinks represented a lot of someone's time, but it is not in the spirit of Wikipedia. All such padding must be removed. Also, two articles have been dumped together without proper merging, so the same facts reappear several times. It all needs work.

The article as it stands is weak. BrainyBabe (talk) 09:58, 3 January 2008 (UTC)