Talk:Mount Lycabettus
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[edit] Copyedit- 1st paragraph
The geographical description in the first paragraph (it may not even be encyclopedic) needs to be cleaned up. I'm not quite sure what it's trying to say. I tried to fix it myself and may have cocked it up more:
removed the sentence "It is accessed with only one road to the west and to Benakis Street and another one-way street." Is there one road to the entire hill or one road on the west side? Also, the sentence on the surrounding Athens areas needs to be clarified.
These two sentences looks like bad translation. Whitejay251 15:20, 29 August 2005 (UTC)
- I removed that description and wrote a more general line or two, as well as copyediting the rest... Looks okay, so I've removed the copyedit template, but who knows :)
- Fenrus 05:31, 30 August 2005 (UTC)