Talk:Moulthrop family
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[edit] NPOV/neutrality
I gave this a once-over and there's a lot of laudatory language in the article; it was also formerly very familiar, before I removed all the references to "Ed" and replaced them with "he," "him," or "Moulthrop." The use of "Ed" suggests to me that the writer knew him personally. Dylan 04:02, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
